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Gosky3


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Trying to be friends with the Elements of Harmony while being the Spirit of Chaos can be rather...conflicting, to say the least.

After having another outburst with his chaotic magic, Discord decides to rid himself completely of it. Doing so, however, has some unexpected consequences that may affect all of Equestria. How will the Mane Six cope with a softer, now harmony-obsessed version of Discord while trying to fight a new threat that's created as a result? Can Discord break his old habits?

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Comments ( 28 )

Oh, this is VERY interesting!~ I am horribly excited for the next update!

6008489 Gosh, Grammar Nazi much?

But you are right. You COULD correct people without making yourself look rude, but I guess you don't care about that.

'Literally what' is not a complete sentence. :p

Comment posted by Gosky3 deleted May 23rd, 2015

6008217 Thanks so much! Next update should be coming pretty soon! :D

6008489 Thanks for the correction! Though, you don't need to correct other people's comments. :P

6008489
Kind of like "awfully excited" or "terribly excited", since, you know, "awful" and "terrible" are synonyms for "horrible".

Nice start! Definitely following this story.:raritystarry:

6010571 Glad you like it! Thanks!

Rest in RIP Discord, Pun master and chaos extraordinaire... You shall be missed. :fluttercry:

I am still LOVING this story man! Keep up the good work! *jazz hands*

Oh, Discord. This kind of stunt never ends well.

Just finished reading the story. Have to say its a good start! Following. :twilightsmile:

6037923 Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Why doesn't this have more views? It's really fun so far, and the writing's pretty good too. I loved the bit with Discord teasing angel. That was hilarious!

Nice job! Bit of an excessive use of exclamation marks, but man, you did a great job with this chapter. I'm really enjoying your storytelling, even if the pace is much faster than I'm used to. If you'd like a proof-reader, I'd be happy to take a look for you. :twilightsmile:

6045909 Thanks for the encouragement and comments! I'm happy you enjoy it! :pinkiehappy:

Discord's far too caught up in bring harmony to the people around him to see that he is the most chaotic thing in town!... Let's hope it stays that way.

I'm still loving this story, despite not having much to say. Keep up the good work!

6164408 I still appreciate your support, thanks! And don't worry, plenty more unintentional chaos is to come! :derpytongue2:

Oh boy... Let's just hope that Discord doesn't go back on his word about not turning ponies into stone. Statues are very orderly... And where is his chaotic part?

I can't wait for the next part!

A wicked smile that would make any filly or foal cry appeared

Technically saying, a filly is a young female pony whole a foal is a young pony in general. I don't know what you planed, but colt is the young male pony.

On another note, neither of them are the real Discord if you think about it. Discord is the Spirit of Chaos and without chaos, he can't be him. I mean, his name is Discord for goodness sake. The 'real' Discord is just the one who isn't trying to take over the world. I do hope they merge Discord back together or something. I can't wait to see whatever you do!

Really? That's as close as Discord's gonna get to an apology? Man those ponies are jerks.

Why would discord get rid of his magic? That what makes him him. Commence mass down vote.

It's a great conclusion for the story.

7517827 Aw, thanks! I was worrying so much on how to end it, that means a lot! :twilightsmile:

Discord just went into Accord mode XD. I mean, Discord being chaotic is what makes you fun!!! Also dang he is like way WAY to harmonious and filled with order now

Though the hug didn’t last long, as it was broken by a goat making cat noises.

Aww Discord wants to be loved XD

Admit it Discord you like being hugged XD

Comment posted by Faithful Follower deleted Jan 27th, 2022

If only something like this was real in the show it would do perfect for Discord's arc to have him understand the ponies and would also make the Mane 5 and the other ponies try to learn to be a little more accepting towards him, I feel sorry for Discord he tries to change, but his chaos nature gets he best of him

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