Achieving Divinity: A New World
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7637860 Quagmire? Is that you?
i dont get it......
7648953 Get what?
How come the sequel to this story also says it's a sequel to this story?
7649972 Don't you hate it when your comments don't get a response?
7707558 The top part here says the story has a sequel, while the sequel says it is a sequel.
The M rated story is a non-canon spin off.
7707564 Yes. Especially when the pony seems to want an answer.
7800199 wat?
7637895 Nope it's just Chuck Testa.
7800340
Good one.
Now then, d*cks out for harambe.
7800680 Hey! That's pretty good!
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7802501 yep
8308998 hehe are you sure it not in your head?
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Oh, I know I'm crazy, which means I'm not crazy. Now, isn't that crazy?
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Ooooohh, your crazy, but I'm insane. That doesn't make me insane, but still insane ether way right.
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Indeed.
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Indeed it is my friend.
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But what if... And hear me out now... Pineapples...
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Oooooo but what if it was...pineapple, it could be an apple or zap Apple?
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I Pinkie Pie promise it could be!
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I double pinkie promise
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I infinity Pinkie Pie promise!
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Guey!!!
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!!!! There is a sequel though, you know? 
MUHUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Thanks for the work, the idea of this crossover is great, the plot is extremely good, the actions of the characters are too different from the originals, especially cadence and shining armor (which is just a stupid distrust of MC and a desire to change armor, given that cadence loves armor very much
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) but here he does not trust the person who saved his wife, sister, friends and himself 3 times, and this is given the fact that they say that he can be trusted
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No, seriously to me, even after I read it disgusting from how you disfigured the character of armor and cadence.
Cadence for armor in fire and water just like he will do the same
Also, the distrust of the armor towards MC is very much imposed by you, by the way armor trusts his family and friends (you can even remember the moment when Spike brought Torex, he is a changeling who almost killed his wife, sister, friends, but he accepted Torex because Spike said that he can be trusted
If you didn't spoil the personalities of the characters, it could be a masterpiece
my rating is 6/10
And again, thanks for the work.
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Actually, their characters would have been much better, but when writing the scene between them, I lost like an hour of work cause my laptop crashed and I couldn’t work the scene out the same way for some reason, so it set a different precedent for the rest of the chapters and their characters here. And tbf, all my writing here has been a learning curve in general and I’m much better now at it.