A boy sits on a broken wall, he is not a complete human however. He is suddenly whisked away through an attempt by Twilight Sparkle trying a new summoning spell, however, the boy isn't the only thing that got sucked through. Out in the dreaded badlands where the changelings reside, something wicked stirs, and little does anyone know that the boy will be the key to keeping Equestria safe.
Story is set after season 2 but Discord is one of the good guys now. The timeline is also jumbled a bit so the Crystal empire came first, than the wedding.
There are two "Books" in this story, signifying the parts, yes Godzilla universe is in it along with other things.
WARNING: Anthro.
WARNING: Some aspects of the story may need to be explained and/or will be explained in the story through a flashback.
You are going to fix the the errors here right?
3914771 depends, by fix do you mean add more meat to said chapter, or make some changes?
3915097 There are a few typos and grammar errors.
Are those errors really worth 16 dislikes? then people are just to lazy to help you fix those problems.
Therefor I offer myself to help you out.
Cant wait for the next chapter
3987194 Don't worry, it's on the way, just adding a few things to it.
3995296 Everyone is anthro aside from a few species.
Llleeeeeerrrrrooooyyy jeeeernnkiiiinnsss
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But yes, Leroy Jenkins all the way! Hope someone actually caught that!
I just read your whole story to this point, and it's a good story. But to me it feels rushed a little bit, and there are a few spelling errors in some of the chapters. Take a day or two before you put out a chapter to check your spelling. Other than that, like i said it's a good story.
3997202 Thank you, And I know it's a bit rushed, there were some reasons as to why, one of them being I am not sure how to save them to start again on a next day, some of the rushed is meant to be there, on account of sequel I have in mind, as well as a few other things. I am glad you enjoy the story though.
Liking this to at least make the likes/dislikes even. If people say it's good, it doesn't deserve so much dislikes.
4000705 your so kind.
just out of curiousity did a few of these forms/monsters come from the godzilla's worlds?
4002789 Yep.
4003559 hmm thought so cuase when the plant one came up I had to reread that paragraph for ten minutes racking my brain for what monster that I know had that description.
4003576 He he, really?
4004204 yep I literally read then reread, then reread a few times to make and then I figure it out though I did have to search her up to remeber what she looked like and whar her story was bout.
* slight low echo* hehehe.
4004726 Oh okay But yeah, I thought she fit as "Gaia" seeing as to how both have a strong connection tot he earth, get it?
4004815 yeah......great now we need is all of them discovering the a Godzilla is under cantorlot sleeping....but then the question whick godzilla would it be, I like the american version that has the name Zilla.
4004820 Heh, in the sequel, which is up or coming up, I just oasted the first chapter, a demonic someone is underneath a certain castle
4004834 yep.just found it and stop and I was like wait a second.......did he actually do that in the sequel.
4004839 Did I do what?
4004852 the godzilla sleeping under cantorlot. pending on which one too.
4004862 Eh no, wrong monster. Wrong castle, is the chapter not up?
4004868 no it's there it was the names that got me for a second with that idea in my head.
4004872 So you read the chapter, right? Because I look at it and go "Zero chapters? The f*&k? I have a thousand words for the chapter, the heck is happening?!" situation....
4004872 And now it says it does...my logic is missing somewhere..."Hey look, is that the script?"
rushed and slopy as fuck need s work but will see where this will fo. Also make a prologe or some thing it is normaly a very shitty idea to just jump in with out setting up the stage. Also antro means they have fur dude you have everyone with Skin and more satyr like so that is humnized not antro
dude slow the bloody fuck down fastest way to kill a story is no build up
4150829 . . . I...okay?
4150869 Sorry.
Its a fun read.
4418818 Why thank you good reader! Hear! Take this heart of happiness!
DUH DUH DUH DUUHHH!!
well that escalated quickly
it seems that more and more things want to make his life difficult
4529839 yep
4527611 Pretty much
So...fast...paced...
4666994 Yes, yes it was
Let me guess who the dark chuckling is coming from, Hades.
3995296 I think they're all anthro.
4786191 Maybeh....
Ha Ha Ha Why is it I can actually see Discord saying that?
4869458 Because he told me to say it OuO
4666994 i agree completely
hmm Chrysalis. I've read a story with the main character and Chrysalis are in similar relationship but a good idea none the less
3915097 it's wings not wins
5385087 Right?
5583809 Sorry, thought I had spelt that right back then. Hm...troublesome indeed...
Roll credits!
Wait a minute...
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Wut?
Is it just me or is Nova a more badass version of Ichigo from bleach?
I would have gutted bluebitch like a fish if he ever did that to my daughter that's if I had one