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Alchemystudent


Loves to read and write, I decided to try writing fanfiction after a long hiatus thanks to ponies

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"Only those whose lives are short believe love is eternal. You need to embrace life for it is the greatest gift we have."

Twilight alsways believed that live is to be cherished, to be cared for. So, when she meets a stallion who is on the edge of life, what will she discover that makes life so precious. Will she come to a better understanding about what is more precious to us, our memories or our feelings connected with those memories.

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Hmm.... interesting

Excellent story, almost seems too short. But other than detailing how the vast library is moved and where to there is nothing left to say.
Found these for you as Kudxuhaiku says the typos sneak in between the end of the story and the push of the publish button.

Wit a quiet nod, Twilight put away her instructions [ with ]
the bridge that expanded across the river [ extended ] ?????????????
Cortuisan’s way o \f taking [ of ]
Yes, he was quite a mast of that indeed. [ master ]
Looking back at the book and the sell in question [ spell ]
her and her friends and their victory of Discord, [ over ] ???
MAyfly
and you’ll ( word missing ? ) the truth

That episode was given a much better treatment later on, by the original writer himself in fact. It was the basis of a movie called "Man from Earth". Its a flawed movie, but I enjoyed it.

Its always good to read someone's work tackling these big ideas. What does make a life worth living? Should there be an upper bound on life in principle, or does it just look that way because of the happenstance of the world.

The idea that Lorien from B5 presents is probably true on the the timescales that character experienced, but it always struck me as being incomplete, a small part of a much greater story.

Anyway, enjoyed the read, though you may want an editor to look it over once for you, there are some typos here and there.

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Ok, Now I got to go and fin that movie. Thank you so much

Interesting and thoughtful read, I like the morals and bits of lore caught in the text. Also, the failsafe plans were hilarious.
However, there is also quite a lot of typos, Bronzedragon already pointed some of them out, yet they are still there.

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