Fluttershy already dates Rainbow Dash for some time, but is her heart really ready for such relationship? What would happen to her, if she discovers Rainbow's secret wish?
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Garthreon
Uninteresting brony with pathetic abilities to write - not even a native english speaker... As I said, nothing interesting here. Move along.
Garthreon
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Okay, It was kinda badly worded, but then i saw english wasn't your first language. But it was good. Kept me on the edge of my seat.
This depressed me, alot.
God damnit, good thing I was listening to Zardonic - Scream through the whole story! Awww Yeaaaah!
41857 Well, DUH! That's the point of pony shipping, anypony with anypony.
Thank you guys for comments, all of you.
I'm happy that you liked it (at leat i hope you did).
i think I just had a D'AWW attack
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Yeah I figured that
Sorry garthreon, but I really cannot read this. I am very finicky about reading stories with poor grammar or, as I think it is in this case, syntax. Your sentences are mostly grammatically correct, but sometimes you mess up the conventional word order, which is not necessarily incorrect, just odd.
I am sure your story is beautiful though, so I will give you 5 stars. If your native tongue is Spanish, I would like and be able to read this same story but in Spanish.
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I tried to reread and "fix" the story several times before I published it, but it seems that many mistakes passed through. Again, I'm sorry for that. Thanks for your comment anyways.
Well, in fact my first language is Czech
ok im curios now where did twilight go afer she got teleported out of ponyville?? and why does no one care about twilight but spike??