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Nice, and Twilight finally accepted her pervert side :3
I knew when It said "breast expansion" that I was going to enjoy it.
It does has some grammar errors but over all it was great!
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Grammar errors?
... where? Point them out to me, so that I may hunt them down and scour the earth clean of their unsightly presence.
Now that was enjoyable.
Why are there no character tags?
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That is a good question, and the only answer I have for is that I overlooked them in my eagerness to get this out the door and published. I'll go and fix that up.
Well then. I accidentally hit the 'unpublish' button when looking over it and trying to save a grammar edit. I don't know what that's gonna do.
I feel so... kinky after reading this... Is there something I missed or something... because now I started to think about too many questions...
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You're supposed to feel kinky! It's, well, smut fiction. It's not supposed to make you think too hard.
But I'm always happy to answer a few questions, if you feel they're worth asking.
Yeah, if stuff is coming out of there in lumps you might oughta see a doctor about that.
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Well, I didn't know how else to describe it.
Pints?
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Streams? Mouthfuls? Spurts? Lumps makes me think of something at least semisolid. And I don't know about you, but the only solid thing I've been pleased to see come out of a vagina was my daughter.
Before I read, what is the Dark tag for ?
Is it jest because of the bad-end ?
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The bad end, and well, some people would think a woman slowly losing her mind and body to lust and going completely under someone's mental control is a bit 'dark.'
This same answer applies to all of your comments like this, btw.
I just skimmed this story, and the ending didn't seem that bad to me, since Sunset's life is still kind of normal during the day.
Twilight you GENIUS!!! A for effort.