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Haha, someone just used the exact same picture for their cover art.
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Yes, I think I might know what you're talking about. I do believe I saw another story with it, and I wasn't sure what cover art to use for this one, and I saw that picture and I was like "THAT'S PERFECT."
Even at the risk of being... unoriginal.
But seriously, it's perfect. Look at the way her hands are curled, and the wide, seductive grin!
Hooray for another of this
Oh come on. That's the extent of their victory? Dazzling Academy? What happened to making the entire world adore them? That was their goal before wasn't it? And with an additional siren bolstering their numbers and any significant threats neutralized what's stopping them from doing that? I'm not normally one to ask for more from a 'bad ending' but Adagio has quite possibly been the most dangerous villain to date. Intelligent, manipulative, powerful, and ambitious. The only reason she lost truthfully was because the story demanded the heroes win, and effectively even then because of a fluke. The Rainbooms' whole victory can effectively be pinned down to just because Vinyl "never takes her headphones off." If she hadn't freed them then the Dazzlings would have very likely won. So if you're gonna go for a 'very bad end' then don't just leave it there cuz Sunset-Dazzle power couple is better than that
I feel this one is the weakest of the three. I can say I enjoyed the other two, but not this one.
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It's the pacing. I've been burning out for awhile here, so rather than take my time with it and polish it, I rushed through and just popped it off out the door without thinking about it too much. In the first two, it was entirely about one Mistress and them slowly dominating Sunset, but this one wants to make a multitude of Mistress dominate a multitude of characters in a very short span of time. Doing this story justice, in a proper way, it would have put each member of the Mane Six in their own chapter, have them each broken slowly, and have Sunset slowly come to enjoy dominating them, rather than the almost handwave like, "oh, she's back to her evil self" way it was done here.
you know... I am not a big breast fan... but... seeing 'very bad ending?' I just have to see...
Love it.
So this was like, a huge dream? Fair enough.
Okay it's nearly 4am time to go and sleep lol
Great idea, but I've never been one to like where the villain wins, Villain, in this case, being Adiago because Sunset is doing this, not of her own free will. To that end, I think it would have been better if Sunset or Twilight became the Mistress instead of Adiago
I think that Midnight or Sunset taking control would be the lesser of two evils if it was them or the Dazzlings that took the school under their control
But, otherwise, nice story
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Agreed