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That's nice, but do you think you could actually tell me about what you thought of the story, though?

:fluttershyouch: ... please?

Another Bimbofication story man these keep popping up recently. good i like this story and cant wait too see more

Well where to start? The story is not that bad.personally I thought Fluttershy would be a horrible bimbo but you made it work grieving a valid reason for her being a bimbo.also instead the reason as exposition you actually told what happen which was smart and a good move. It seems to be more story then sex which isn't a bad thing but you need to balance the ratio a little bit with sex being at least thirty percent but overall not bad I wouldn't put it in my favorites but I will save for a later overall I give it a 5.4/10.

I'll be honest, that title was the sole reason I read this...

I wasn't disappointed. :twilightblush:

Any chance for a sequel of some kind?

I'm not even sure what to say about that title. :rainbowlaugh:

Well with this and Rarity to room 69, you've earned yourself a follow. Sometimes I just need a fic like this to cheer me up after a boring day of uni

Nice, I had an idea about Fluttershy gradually being turned into a bimbo too. I guess great minds think alike.

This is where I get off.” Rainbow Dash turned and walked off.

And if you'd stayed, you'd be saying that too.

6044914
Oh? Do tell ... :trollestia:

6044852
Maybe. I have work to do elsewhere, so my rule of thumb is, for so much I work I manage to finish, I can write a bimbofication story. So if I manage to hit another benchmark, I could see writing a sequel. After all, after I published this story, I thought of something ... what would happen if Fluttershy took off the magic-suppressing cloth without being triggered to? Say, trying to change clothes? Would she still transform, or what?

Comment posted by CassandraMyOCisBestpony deleted Jun 2nd, 2015

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Fluttershy: "I change my clothes about once every two months. What? you said you wanted me to be dirty."
Sunset: ":facehoof: For fuck's sake, Fluttershy."

I liked the story. Good flow, decent grammar, and all the characters were in character. And also, this is the first story I've read to have Tree Hugger! Wooo!

The only flaw I could possibly see is that a bimbo isn't just big boobs. A bimbo is also big hips and long flowing hair. And that speech problem where they go something like, "Oh my gosh, that is like so cool."

6040714 Well, first of all, it's not 'something much wickeder'. It's just 'something much wicked'. The first use is improper and sounds horribly awkward.

6045793
Well I daren't go into too much detail in case someone nicks my idea, but basically Fluttershy gets a pen pal, and somehow everything he writes about her magically becomes true. Of course there's bimbification or however you spell it.
Blaagh that's probably too much detail anyway. Who knows, maybe we could collab on it or something. :moustache:

6047573
I see. Sounds like a barrel of fun. Though like I told Koekelbag, I have other projects to do ... and I've never collaborated with anyone before, so you may be stuck on your own with this one.

Then again, I might be sabotaging myself by the fact I keep coming back here to see if there are new comments. :P

P.S ... I have always seen it spelled as "bimbofication."

This really should have a dark tag...

6048357
Oh, should it? I wasn't quite sure.
Fixed.

with all these new bimbofication stories starting to pop up someone should start a group just for these types of stories

6049086

Probably because of the mental corruption, the rape, the mind control, and the unwanted body modification.

6048433
A friend and I talked about that. We're working on it.

6049100
Wait ... the mental corruption, mind control, and unwanted body modification, I'll give you, but where was the other thing?
I didn't ... I didn't quite realize I crossed that line.

6050310

She's being forced to perform sex acts against her will. Just because she's under mind control doesn't mean she consents.

I don't know what's wrong with me, but I have a strange fondness for Bimbofication Stories. I know it's wrong to enjoy a Story where a Girl turned into a mindless Slut (without her Will), but I can't help to enjoy those kind of Stories

6051122

I see ... well, that's fair enough.

6050310 that great. it about time someone started making more of these bimbo fics. i'm guessing you going to have more with other Mane turning into bimbos as well

Not bad, but it doesn't read as bimbofication so much as sluttification; there's more to being a bimbo that just having big tits and the urge to suck cock and guzzle cum.

the image source links to a smaller image?....

6048433 I kinda beat hi towards that one Xd

I think I have a new favorite crack pairing - Sunset/Discord/Fluttershy was a lot of fun to read. Sunset's alpha nature and street savvy, Discord's need for fun and mischief, and Fluttershy's trusting naivete (with small hints of stubbornness underneath) brought out the best in all three. I loved your dialogue between them.

So Fluttershy is cursed and pregnant, Sunset has a new toy, the Animal Center is a lot wealthier, and Discord is... Discord?

6327335

Fluttershy's not pregnant.

:raritywink:

6330390 ah. Well, I was reading a bit fast. But wasn't she in her normal form?

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Yyyyyyeees?

It happened while she was in 'cursed' form, and had yet to go away when she was back to normal form.

6330493 ah. I was under the impression that her mind didn't right itself until she turned back.

Well i dont know what i expected:eeyup:

It's quite interesting. Certainly a rather unique(good) way to handle a basic idea.

Any project to continue this ?

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I have an idea for a sequel, certainly, but I prefer to have it finished before publishing, and I'm not sure if I'll be able to do that. Other commitments, you know?

“I understand what it is you're trying to do.” Fluttershy said. “You're trying to condition me with a new name and a new identity to accept my fate as a bimbo. But aside from being a terrible thing to name someone in general, even for a bimbo, "Big Boobs" is ... very uncreative.”

She has a point there.

I've gotten into the habit of using my debit card for everything and not carrying around much cash. But after reading this story, I always make sure I have $50 cash on hand.

Big Boobs? Why? That name is pretty stupid, wouldn't it have been easier just to call her Flutterslut or Sluttershy?

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It's part of a set! In the sequel, (if it ever gets written) all the bimbo victims get new names based on body parts!

Plus, it's alliterative. :trollestia:
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O ... kaaaay.

I love a good bit of Sluttershy, and Big Boobs here is a pretty good example of that.

So, who's next? Big Butt the Booty Bimbo?

Did a little reading of this fic, it can be found here;

Hope someone enjoys!

I'm not sure why I keep coming back to reread this. While I'm willing to admit that I find women with big breasts attractive (within reason), I prefer also prefer them to be intelligent. Also, the part about Fluttershy/Big Boobs being mind controlled into having sex makes me feel uncomfortable.

7178819

I know how you feel! The fact I had to have the Dark tag pointed out to me still upsets me.

And normally, I like to think I'm for a woman's right to be independent and make her own decisions ... but the idea of mind controlled sex is still very appealing to me. It gets confusing.

7187203 It doesn't have to be confusing. After all, everyone has fetishes they wouldn't do in real life.

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