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Orkus


Death is a preferable alternative to communism.

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Xûr, Agent of the Nine, has been sent to Equestria to seek out more of the strange coins his enigmatic masters value. His tireless search soon brings him to the kingdom of the changelings, who prove to be a most interesting group of clientele.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 25 )

Color me intrigued. Now if Xur sells the Changelings a Thunderlord or something I'll be disappointed. Now a 'ling accidentally hitting the boosters on Twilight Garrison or buying a sparrow would be hilarious.

"We came up from the dust and burrowed into flesh for warmth and became something new."

This story is pretty well written. Cant wait to see what happens next.

Ohkay... I'm guessing Xur is from some other work of fiction.

You've got my interest, let's see if you can keep it.

7227696 He is from a game known as 'Destiny'.

alright tracking of story has begun we might see by your next chapter if you get a like out of me :pinkiecrazy:

Annnnnnnnnnnnd all the changelings will seriously regret not buying that Rocket Launcher on week 2.

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

7229090 "why the hell would we want a rocket launcher when there's these sweet looking fire horse shoes!" :yay:

So this is what Combine Advisors do while in their pods waiting for Half Life 3? Writing stories on Fimfiction. In-case you have not noticed, Freeman has been waiting to board the borealis for nine years.

7244428 FREEEEEEMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN.

:fluttershysad:...................

can..... can i help them, please? :fluttercry:

it's just... just that they struck my feels with their.... ehm, "problem".....:pinkiesad2:

i just want to help them..... can i help them to gain freedom, please?:applecry:


...........please?:pinkiesad2:

Hope Chryalis isn't evil in this at least not to Her own people.

Well...

Damn.


Here I thought I could get through the day being a stone cold lump of butter, but you just had to stab me with the heated butter knife of feels. Please lets those changeling babies/foals/nymphs live.:fluttercry:

7245616 Me to, I prefer her to be reasonable and not needlessly cruel.

This has to be the best Xur I've ever seen written.

Granted, it's the only Xur I've seen in a fanfic, but still. You're successfully building off of what little Bungie has given us, and forming something that fits.

This is a cool story. I actually half expected to see hundreds of changelings wielding gallajorns and paitence & times, but really I'm glad that hasn't happened... At least not yet.

Aw no man, the . . . The feel-hhnnggg! :pinkiegasp:

All I can imagine now is Xûr selling the changeling eggs to some unsuspecting Guardian, only to have them hatch and now this Guardian has the responsibility of raising two creatures they have never seen before and know absolutely nothing about.

Actually, now that I think about it more, it would pretty neat to have two changeling pets that could possibly even disguise themselves as Fallen, Hive, Vex or Cabal and slip behind enemy lines to gather information, basically acting as spies for the Guardians.

After you finish this story, can you make one where Xûr goes and barters with the ponies?

If u continue this, u could have xur raise the changeling to be the equestrian agent of the nine

What a curious idea. Certainly an interesting one, color me intrigued.

And now Xur has some changeling eggs. Who knows where those will end up...

Alas it seems I've run out of story. I'll track this in case we ever get more, Hope springs eternal after all...

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