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Note: Has a strong tie-in to Devourer, and reading it first is recommended, but is not considered canon to the Devourer's history.

The powerful witch Thaegan and her thirteen children were all killed in the righteous fight for Deltora... granted, they weren't fighting to free it. However, like in many other universes and worlds, some beings don't simply vanish on death.

Now, Thaegan and her children find themselves in the midst of a massive nest of shape-shifting creatures and must figure out how to deal with the circumstances. Are they welcome in the hive? How will her kids take this turn of events? How will the hive's unique resident take to having new guests? And what will they do, now that they have come back to life?

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 28 )

Deltora quest crossover? :pinkiegasp:
Must read.

Okay you get a thumbs up just for using Sorceress Thaegan.:pinkiehappy:

love deltora forgot all the kids names just remember ikabods

nice story, can't wait for more ^^

again: potential

Just don't fear to cross the "gateless border"
Don't fear the reaction of others just do it ^^.

"Piong...." hi again ^^

“Was that Ichabod I just heard?” Hot asked.
“I think-*smash*” Tot replied, his words cut off by another smash.
“You think what?”
“No, I think so, so…”
“…So what?”
“So what about what?”
“…What?”

its really cofusing and not in a good way ^^"
try to add at least, even if you want that to be a fast part, some short descriptions, like "Hot looked at his brother and replyed, a bit confused..."...
you know a bit more scenery ^^. thats all

nice but a bit short ^^" ;]
see ya later ^^~~~

1893384 Ah, thank you for the criticism! I FINALLY GOT CRITICISM!!! :pinkiehappy:

I added a little more to the section you mentioned, hopefully clearing it up. Near the end it still gets a bit confusing, but that's part of the joke since even Hot and Tot aren't sure who said what by that point.

The chapter was supposed to be short, to be honest. I planned on having a short chapter for each pair of Thaegan's children, ending with one chapter for Ichabod with the Devourer and one for Thaegan and Chrysalis. After that, I intended to "get on with it" so to speak and actually advance some of the plot: right now is mostly where the Slice of Life tag comes from as we watch how Thaegan's children are dealing with living in the hive.

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Nice work ^^. A nice "you can run, but you can't hide." scenery ^^

1952884 ............GOSH DANGIT, how did I not remember the title of that game!?
...I feel like I need to change this story's title now...

HOORAY FOR CHANGELING BABIES THAT AREN'T GRUBS!!!:pinkiehappy:

Deltora crossover? INSTA FAVORITE AND LIKE.

Huh, never heard of the Deltora books before, might have to check them out.

Chryssie sure is cheery.

D'awwww, like one dysfunctional but loving family.

Whew, fit a moment there I was worried. No hurting any changelings.

Poor changeling siblings.

Huh, nice meal.

Eeeeeeeeeeeee, kid changelings, so cute!

Snrk, they've already integrated quite well.

... Even younger changelings! *melts from all the cute*

... A few more fixes like that and Lun might get some good brain damage.

*Sees thumbnail* Instant fav for Deltora Quest!!!!

For those who got confused with the end, Thaegan's favourite food is a live raven

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