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Twilight says goodbye for the first time in what will be a very, very long life for her.


Written for the Lightning Round prompt collab.

Also written in honor of Eve.

Now with a reading by PonyThunder.

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Comments ( 25 )

Ouch, as someone who had to have of their cats put down only last year this story really hit home.

Just...just cut out my heart and shoot it with the Owlowiscious scene...But the end?
You just shredded it, dear author. You shredded it and now I'm sobbing.

Well done. Very, very well done!

Ack! Just sucker punch me in the feel, why don't you!

man you realy broke me, I'm in tears raight now
my cat just pass out this morning and reading this, It makes me realy sad.
good story btw

you're right, made me cry. it was a really good story though. I always liked the alicorn Twilight sad fics like this, and I thought about doing something like that in one of my stories.

I lost four ferrets over the years. Three to natural causes, who I should have had put down long before they went. By the time the last one got bad I finally had the wherewithal to do what needed to be done. It was the right call, but jeez. I'm glad I had a friend drive that day.

Such a sad scene...
Been a while since I read a story that moved me this much. Great job on this.

7197458 What I like to think is that, at least she'll still have Spike a thousand years later, because as you know dragons also live for a very long time.

7198334 They do. But that does not make the passing of a loved one any easier at the time. Or in the near-ish future. But hey, silver linings.

7198407 It definitely doesn't make it any easier, but at least she'll have someone to comfort her and mourn with her.

I did a reading of your fanfic, hope you enjoy! I had some fun with improv-ing background music on this one.

Remembrance

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It's such a hard decision to make. The only thing is trying to convince yourself that it's the better way; letting them suffer is just inhumane. Eve was never in pain, but she struggled every day. Her last week was especially hard, and the night before was just.... depressing.

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Pretty much what I was aiming for. Not an easy story to read and have dry eyes by the end. It was a lot harder to write, let me tell you.

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Celestia's always struck me as a very tragic character for that reason. For 1000 years, she didn't have her family.

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Thank you very much! It's very well done. I didn't expect to get one of this story, but...

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The stories I can do are kind of limited since I can't do a lot of the voices. So this one worked out fairly well for that :twilightblush:

Umm... excuse me Mr or Ms Kinsley.
Please do not play or toy with my emotions.
It makes me more sad.
also this is one of the great tear-jerkers.
good job :,)

Jesus H. Christ. I knew I shouldn't have read this RIGHT AFTER having a dog put to sleep!:raritycry:

My throat was swollen the whole read through. It's even more sad to know that he parents are dead and her close friends. One of the sad things of being an alicorn in this story.

7201759 makes me want to Avada Kedavra her right now to free her of her pain

The burden of life eternal is a terrible one.

It always hurts me to consume any form of media where an animal dies. I've had pets throughout my whole life and it's never easy whenever I lose one. It hurts the most when you put everything into making sure they stick around, but they just aren't able to pull through because it's so bad... I've been in that room, holding onto my family member while we say our goodbyes.

They may only be a small part in your life, but to them, you are their everything.

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More than 3 months later, not a day goes by that I don't miss having her around.

Bravo. Beautiful, beautiful fic. Brought tears to my eyes.

:pinkiesad2: Such a sad and relatable story...

was spike still alive

Ugh I HATE YOU SO MUCH! I don't even own animals and you're making me seriously cry at the party where Twilight walked through the rest of the graves!

... Nah just kidding, the story was awesome. Short but super heartbreaking. I love you for making me cry so hard right now.

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