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ShadowblazeCR


As a writer you ask yourself to dream while you're awake. As an editor you ask yourself how to change a story while leaving it the same.

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Shinning Amour and Cadence argue on what to do with Flurry Heart and her cold.

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Oh god... Poor Shining... Always getting the short end of the stick. Completely whipped, that stallion.:rainbowlaugh:

well written. :twilightsheepish:





Ending feels slightly incomplete though.

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I was slightly torn on how to end it, because I thought it could be too abrupt. I kept it though because of the comedic timing. Having the last step show made it where Shining and the audience realize that the single step could've prevented everything.

>>ShadowBlazeCR

hmm, makes sense:moustache:

Typical housewife drama, what a classic conflict!

That was entertaining :rainbowlaugh:

HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I laughed my ass off!!!!!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

I loved this! :pinkiehappy:

The customer is always right.

The wife is also always right.

Ok, this story was hilarious!:rainbowlaugh:

Approved by Pinkie Pie:pinkiesmile:

Love it, poor Shining getting dominated by Alicorns again.😄

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