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sevenofeleven


It is my great conceit that I can write interesting stories for utter strangers and maybe sometime in the far far future get paid for it.

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A concerned father watches his beloved daughter as she thrashes in her sleep. She has fallen ill to a disease that magic and medicines can't cure. A nurse watches the grief stricken father and worries that his daughter and other children will die unless a remedy is found.

Unknown to the father and nurse, a remedy is galloping into town in the form of three troubled ponies.

Contains: Some Gore, Some Violence

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 22 )

Is DT going to be asleep for the majority of this fic? Because if she is, there's no point in me following it. Awaiting your answer with interest. :ajbemused:

I dont really care if DT is gonna be asleep for most of this. Its a pretty good story and if we can keep seeing what DT is seeing that would be awesome plz wright more soon:pinkiehappy:

7185878
More will be written soon.

i LOVE it! r u gonna wright more or is this the end of this story? And u have to make more stories about Ciderslinger, Spell, and Trouble. :pinkiehappy:

7203258
Yeah, I will write more.
I was planning to do a series of short stories if someone was interested.

You might like this one:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/233086/gleaner-chronicles

This is really good.

A great end to the story, but an even greater beginning to a journey.

Comment posted by Duskbreaker deleted Aug 7th, 2016

This feels very Lovecraftian. I like it.

7642200
Thanks, I have been writing Gothic horror for a while.
And I have been reading HPL and friends for a while too.

7642389
it shows, keep up the good work.

7642394
Thanks.

Did you wonder who was that guy hanging out near the store when Diamond Tiara ran past?
There was a non pony story that covered that.
Do you want to check it out?

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Another influence was the Constantine tv show.
Even though it needed a few months more work, the show had some nice bits.

7642756
Sure, if you want me too. I don't mind while I wait for my new story to pass submission

7642756
You know that is pretty cool, you know what i really like about this little prequel?

7642856
The fact Peter could have paid his debt instead of dragging more people to the creature. Unless of course, that kiss was a joke.

7643124
If Peter was brave, he could have saved a few lives by doing the kiss.
Though to kiss something he couldn't even look at would be a difficult thing to do.

7644398
Very true. Good story either way.

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