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sevenofeleven


It is my great conceit that I can write interesting stories for utter strangers and maybe sometime in the far far future get paid for it.

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Golden Harvest(Carrot Top) lost her home, but with the help of a friend of a friend she found a new home. She thought it would be smooth sailing from now on. Golden Harvest was sooo wrong...

Edited by Ponygon.
https://www.fimfiction.net/user/250909/Ponygon

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

Of course the Equestrian version of the foundation would have a public face :)

Your mane and tail are like the setting sun, I'm in love!

You know what... The very first letter woulda made me cringe and creeped me out already.:twilightoops:

I wish I could be a pretty flower or the cloud pattern that brings a smile to your face and makes your emerald eyes glow. I envy the gentle breezes that caress your soft yellow fur.

This... This... this is getting out of hoof. I woulda DROPPED the letter, BOLTED inside and SLAMMED my door shut knowing there is random creepy dude WATCHING me somewhere I don't even know. BAD neighborhood, BAD things happen. Lesson of life, man. Lesson of life. :applecry:

Darn it, Goldie, whatcha just get yourself into...:facehoof:

it was an interesting story, a couple parts of it felt rushed and needed more details to work but it was a good read

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Thanks for checking out the story.
Which areas felt rushed?

9053341
too exhausted all the time to read through again to point out each one but it's mostly the transition scenes

Surprised Equestrian Foundation bothers hiding stuff, unless it's got a memetic effect or is otherwise made dangerous/unsafe/unobtainable due to knowledge.

The mailbox would just be seen as a cursed object, or the building itself as haunted. Cursed and dangerous magical hoohikcery is common. If its not a mesurable magical effect just make the cover up that its cursed.

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