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Hope Is Never Lost


What you look like is just one part of who you are- but it's not all you are. Don't judge ones appearance but judge their actions. A monster is not evil by appearance but by the choices they make.

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Calo Nord was an infamous bounty hunter according to all the rumors about him. A strange creature that would kill anything for the right price. He never failed in his job. What no pony knows is that under the icy facade is a soft heart. Not that he would admit to anyone. Tracking another contract he finds himself in Ponyville while meeting the ponies there. What can happen?

WARNING: DISPLACED FICTION!

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 48 )

I actually forgot about calo nord. Nice job

7179407 What can I say? I like Calo Nord and thank you.


7179465 That's not even fair lol.

Hmmm... so you are re-writing the other one(you know how much I searched for it? I saw this and though -cause I dont really remember the name of 700 authors- that this was already made. What happen to it I asked? Searched, for hours, HOURS!)Dang man. The story was just reaching the good part when u decide to do dis... + cliff hanger... ... ... ... *Manly tears*. But nonetheless it is good :D Like a good reader I will support ur decision... ... ... ... ... ... ... just dont go all George R,R, Martin with us xD

P.S. Once more, this is a master piece in process. Can't wait for it to hit 40K words so it could go to my favorites :rainbowkiss:

yeah I was wondering about that. Guess writing a Boba Fett displaced wasn't working out. If this is the same author at least.

7182318 Actually I have no idea what you talking about.:rainbowderp:


7182756 Are you talking about Son Of Mu? I knew he had a fanfiction about Boba Fett displaced but never read it. Honestly

7182878 Never mind found the one i was referring to (wasn't the Boba Fett one after all), it reads kinda the same...that's weird this one longer and worded different :trixieshiftright: how strange. Lost In The Light Of Shadows by Satsuma

The umber-coated pony wearing in a dark brown leather jacket walked briskly but unhurriedly down the street, and turned down one of the many side alleys in pursuit of his target. It was late in the night so he did not have to worry about prying eyes.

Upon entering the alley, he quickly took note of his environments. The alley was a dead end, with a two-metre wire fence blocking the way through to another street. Other than that, there were a few dumpsters on either side of the alley, and a set of rusting metal stairs and platforms running up to various residences on the right side. An orange lambda symbol was graffitied on one of the walls. There was nowhere his quarry, an earth pony (who was frankly not in good physical shape) could go.

‘Heyyeeaaah!’

He brought his right hoof forcefully behind his head, where it made contact with his target, who seemed to have attempted a noisy and unsuccessful ambush. There was a dull thud as the other pony landed unceremoniously on the floor.

‘I could hear you breathing, you know.’

The dun, grey-maned earth pony scrambled to take hold of the knife he had dropped, but it was whisked out of his reach by his pursuer. His expression changed from one to wild determination to dread.

‘You know, ambushes are usually quiet.’

The assailant toyed with the knife as he spoke, throwing it the air, spinning it around in his grasp, before finally throwing it casually behind him, where it landed with a dull clang in an empty dumpster.

‘Look, Dusk, I can make it worth your while. Take a rain check. Please.’

Dusk continued to approach his target, taking his time as he slowly trotted up to where the dun-coloured pony was scrambling backwards. He found that it tended to make his victims nervous.

‘I would, but how am I going to answer to my employers, Smoke? In my line of work, it’s all about trust you see. ‘

He got closer.

‘Who’s going to give me another contract if I breach their trust? Like how you breached our employers’ trust two week ago and ran off with nearly five thousand bits’ worth of marejuana.’

‘Please, Dusk. I have a family to feed. Just let me off. Let us off.’

I will give this a tracking...for now. I mean, it reads really similar like the Boba Fett one mentioned before, we're probably talking about the same story, with even the first chapter being almost exactly like the first one of the B.F. story. Nonetheless, as far as I looked for it, the Boba Fett story got either deleted or is buried so deep in FIMFiction that I won't try to find it. So I will look how this one goes.

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... *sigh* There was a story before this one, same plot and all. Can't find it anymore, but seeing this and not finding that story mades me think you were the author. The story was basically the same but with Boba Fet as the main displaced.

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7183002 God bless it! I knew there was a story about boba fett. Dang it. Im going to rewrite the chapter appreciate the heads up guys/girls.

Damn it man, Never say that.... great now i have to do this

hmmm white coat celestia? but black mane luna? neither probably

7195688 i could kiss you just do more

7183171 dead the story is dead :fluttercry:

7324416 Not even close sir. I have been working on the next chapter. Its just life and work is kicking my butt lol. Neither of my stories are dead. The only way they will be dead is if I am buried six feet under the cold hard ground.

It's fun finding stories about characters people tend to forget about or over look like calo or Deathstroke (the 're is a fun story with him I found)

Where is Calo Nord from?

7329604 Star Wars knights of the old republic.

Excellent chapter

An update?

Oh happy days!

I'm glad this story was updated.

I still prefer Boba Fett probably because he looks more badass and people are more familiar with him.

Ha ha ha! Calo is so badass it hurts!

Legends will always be Star Wars to me. KoTor I and II are two of my all time favorites.

Tracking.

Hm... Four fillies? :rainbowhuh:

“Cutie Mark Crusader Secret Service?” Sweetie Belle suggested.

“…yeah.”

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oooooouuue we got a secret stocker... or it's pinky pie who just somehow turned her shelf into a fillie for a joke or something.

8560739 thanks for pointing that out

8561032 no I just put the wrong word there

Way? Are you going to quit fimfiction?

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Good bye Buddy have a great life and a safe one.

may i just say that is absolute fucking rubbish? i don't know what made you think otherwise but you do have the skills to write a great story.

I’ll take it over for you! I would hate to see such a fun story go away.

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It’s no problem. I am a big fan of the story, and thought Calo Nord was always a fun character.

worst person to ever adopt it :/

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Honestly, the two of you should work together. It is not easy alone to write a story, but if you have someone you can discuss ideas with and bounce them off of each other. That alone helps. It also can be just ideas you discuss, instead of going full on collab. Just as a piece of advice.

The only complaint I had was that the cover picture made it look like he had a massive dick

I'm glad this was cancel, cuz Crossovers and fanfiction suck.

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