Bubble Boom here. I'm a jack-of-all-trades sort of gal who writes, illustrates, edits, and crafts.
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(These are short scenes for the purpose of practicing writing.)
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Apart from a need to brush my teeth, very good.
Very cute. I love Twidance and Twilestia, so it's always great to have more of it. I do hope you keep practicing!
Having said that, it very much seems like this is practice. It's nothing jarring enough to throw me out of the experience, but... If you'd like, I can point out some things I noticed either in a comment or a PM. Or not at all. It's up to you. Practice makes perfect, but guided practice helps get you there faster.
Regardless, keep it up!
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Thank you, JKinsley! I would very much appreciate it if you would PM me some things. I'll admit I'm not a practiced creative writer but willing to try. :)
I'm waiting for chapter 2 to comment! I really like that you're getting into creative writing more, Bubble. I adore these little scenes and snippets, I really do. So I'm waiting to see what you come out with and surprise me.
Plus, it's basically no fair that you are starting off with my fave princess ships!
Stop trying to kill me with cuteness!
Ah crap, I seem to have caught the diabeetus.
Great job Bubble!
More Luna please! *swoons at the twiluna cuteness*