>clearly smut for smut fic
>59,270 words

You make people work for their orgasms, don't you?

WOW, seems like Spike has a god taste for his mares, especially if his mares happen to be Fleur-de-Lis, Octavia Melody, and Rarity. Wonder how that came to be....

All I can say is that his marefriends definitely know how to take care of their Drakey-Poo

7100183 You can have bad sperm actually that can't impregnate someone, and men like that are called impotent, even though women like that are called infertile.

A clop fic I can't wait to read.

Oh man. I can't wait to read it!

And it looks to me that Spike is gonna get lucky again soon enough on a certain beach house with Rarity and other two beautiful mares. *wink* *wink* *nudge* *nudge*

I loved the entire concept. I commend you for writing a perfect clopfic involving Spike and three of my top beautiful mares.

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What do think of a story title?

7123251 That does sound like a decent title for a sequel, I'll keep it in mind

amazing fic, I WANT TO SEE ONE OF SPIKE AND CELESTIA, LUNA, NIGHTMARE RARITY AND QUEEN CRYSALIDA. PLEASE

7191016 Ow the edge

7191016 You are just adorable with that edge.

you should have put an epilogue for the story maybe make it so that they let spike make moms out of them?

Y'know, I didn't say it before, but this is one of my favorite clopfics on the whole site. It's the 3rd time I'm reading it and I know I'll read it again some other day.

Will read.

Very, very nice! But it definitely needs some editing: I found quite a few spelling mistakes and grammatical problems.

Well I gotta say that was some way to end this. Having Spike ejaculate inside Octavia's breast, and apparently enough to see them actually grow. Gonna be alot of milking sessions before she gets all Spike's sperm out of them.

messaging the gray mare’s still hefty filled breasts

Did her breasts ever reply back to the messaging? and how did Tavi's breasts gets its own cell phone to message with

Loved this.

Love it sweet story.