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xxkillerlol

xxkillerlol #1 · Jan 13th, 2020 · 5 · · Challenge Accepted ·

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Extra Thicc, first

BluePony1

BluePony1 #2 · Jan 13th, 2020 · · · Prologue ·

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Good job on the Prequel Slam, can't wait to get to the rest

BluePony1

BluePony1 #3 · Jan 13th, 2020 · · · Challenge Accepted ·

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it's as thick as it is sublime Slam

Lunatic God

Lunatic God #4 · Jan 14th, 2020 · · · Challenge Accepted ·

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Legit probably the only story I've ever shared before reading. Well done, Slam-Manian. Well done.

Derpy_DragonV1

Derpy_DragonV1 #5 · Jan 14th, 2020 · · · Challenge Accepted ·

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Do you know the artist? It's for uhh...research.

Harms Way

Harms Way #6 · Jan 14th, 2020 · · · Challenge Accepted ·

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This story is awesome! Well done!

Omnishifter

Omnishifter #7 · Jan 14th, 2020 · · · Challenge Accepted ·

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It's Chigusa. Here's a (broken with xx's) link to his work on Adagio in general-hxxps://derpibooru.org/search?q=artist%3Achigusa%2Cadagio+dazzle
The one you're looking for is easy to find.
(hums "Under Our Spell")

Night-Quill

Night-Quill #8 · Jan 15th, 2020 · · · Prologue ·

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Some typos here and there, and while it's not a perspective I'm used to, so far so good.

diablo4000

diablo4000 #9 · Jan 15th, 2020 · · · Challenge Accepted ·

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10034076
Didn't work.

Omnishifter

Omnishifter #10 · Jan 15th, 2020 · · · Challenge Accepted ·

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Did you replace the "xx" with "tt" because I just double-checked and it's fine...

laofuzi

laofuzi #11 · Jan 15th, 2020 · 9 · 1 · Prologue ·

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“Math test?” Snips perks up with a look of sheer confusion. “I thought that was the history test?”

Whaddya think this test is, a history on numerology??!!

Tangy and citreous. Just the thought of the scent sends your mind reeling back into the memory.

He's never going to eat oranges the same way ever again

“Yeah, that’s not fun either,” he slumps forward.

But at least it beats the boring track! I love games that involve combat and competition

“Well, look on the bright side,” Snails chimes in, “at least today ain’t dodgeball day.”

Where's the bright side in that?!

You can’t help but keep your eyes peeled on her. The pale-yellow skinned girl walks away with such grace and confidence, but the thing that truly holds your attention is her ass. The glorious globs snuggly held in by a pair of tight jogging shorts. They jiggle and sway in a flowing motion that’s practically hypnotic, making it nearly impossible to take your eyes off of them. You follow her as she crosses the quad and is a decent distance from the rest of the class before she begins to stretch. You can practically feel your eyes bulging from your skull as you watch her twist and contort her body.

With assets like these, who needs a siren's voice to seduce the whole world to your bidding?

Not until she bends over to touch her toes do you feel your heart threaten to explode from your chest. Her ass truly puts the fabric of her shorts to the test as they look as though they threaten to tear open at the seams when she bent forward or tightened between her cheeks as she stood up. At this point, you could neither confirm or deny that your shorts might have gotten a little…tighter…for some reason.

Snips, gimme your cold water bottle, ASAP!!

“That’s what we call it when you start daydreaming about Adagio,” Snails explains.

What about Adagio archipelago?

“We wouldn’t have to if you’d stop dazing off like that.”

Well, that's why she's called Adagio Dazzle!

“Yeah, man, be real for a second,” Snails says with a raised brow. “You know Adagio’s out of your league. Plus, she’s the meanest girl in school. Basically, the only person Aria is scared of, and she picks fights with the teachers.”

That's why I prefer Sonata Dusk

“I can’t help it guys,” you sigh heavily, “the heart wants what the heart wants.”

Plus, it's just human evolution; bigger asses=more spacious birthing hips=more babies=better chance of human survival

As you continue your leisurely stroll, you can’t help but close your eyes and merely let the melodic voice pull you towards it. As you move, almost mechanically, you feel your mind strolling down memory lane.

And it all turns out to be just a recording!

The pale-yellow skinned girl was dressed in a black fishnet onesie...

I'm never a big fan of fishnets; makes the skin look too scaly and cracked, something I associate with disease

“I do work at a strip club,” Adagio nodded in confirmation. “After we lost our powers, my sisters and I had to get jobs, obviously.”

I knew it!! She is using her assets to her advantages.

“You’re forgetting, I’m a siren, Rarity. I’m a lot older than I look,” the pale-yellow girl winked playfully. “Plus, it’s not a trashy one. It’s really nice. Hell, it’s the nicest one in town. I get paid well. My boss is strict but fair. Plus, I like to dance and have people admire me. I may have lost my powers, but that hasn’t changed.”

OOOH, a cougar, I see! You know, you could ask your boss if you could work as a stripper bartender. I heard it's the next big trending job in strip clubs!

“Oh c’mon, it’ll be fun,” Adagio purred as she turned about and jutted her grandiose rear end at the young woman, “I’ll even let you touch me. Consider it a thank you for putting me on the right path.”

Sexual harassment...

There, sitting against the wall is none other than Adagio. And she’s singing. Singing as she reads a novel and seeing as she’s halfway through and reading so intently, it’s clearly not for homework. You feel your heart swelling, but not in joy, but in a touch of melancholy.
You watch as she sings to herself, a slight smile on her face, but it’s certainly not one of happiness or even contentment. It’s a fake smile, one masking the sadness beneath.

She's actually singing into a wireless microphone that is connected to a Singstar voice modulation app on her phone

You stand there, gritting your teeth, struggling with yourself until you hear, “You know, it’s rude to spy on people, right?”

It's also rude to sexually seduce people without their consent! So that makes two of us!

You look over and see Adagio still staring at her book, not looking away. “Yes, I’m talking to you, dumbass.” She sighs heavily as she closes her book and glances your way, “Are you gonna come one out, or are you still jerkin’ it over there?”

You think I don't know that? And make eye contact with me when you talk!

“The fact that you’re still blushing says enough,” she giggles playfully. “Plus, you haven’t denied that you’re a pervert either, so that’s still on the table.”

Hi Pot! I'm the kettle!

“If there’s one thing to be said about me that is absolutely indisputable, it’s this: I’m an attention whore. I’m used to having eyes on me, so I know when I’m being watched.”

So do we, but it's not for popularity reasons though, I'll tell you that!

You feel the blood drain from your face in terror, and you take notice of Adagio’s smirk widening. “Yeah, don’t try to deny it,” she says, crossing her arms, “I know you’ve been watching me. From time to time, I get this typical feeling of being watched from afar, but it’s always followed by this…heated sensation. Like you’re sending some kind pervy “vibes” or something my way. It’s like you’re eye-fucking me or something.”

Then why didn't you stop me??

You feel the thoughts and feelings from before fighting to get to the surface, but now that you’re talking and she’s basically called you out, do you really have a choice? Do you have anything to lose? You’ve been crushing on Adagio for the longest time. The worst she can say is no. Best, just rip it off like a band-aid and get it over with. You take a deep breath. Straighten your back. Look Adagio right in the eye with a look of determination that seems to take her a bit by surprise as you declare, “I really, like you, Adagio Dazzle! Will you please be my girlfriend?”

If not, then could you at least hook me up with Sonata Dusk?

diablo4000

diablo4000 #12 · Jan 15th, 2020 · · · Challenge Accepted ·

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10035301
Didn't Wwwooorrrrkkkk.

Omnishifter

Omnishifter #13 · Jan 15th, 2020 · · · Challenge Accepted ·

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10035443
Well then if you're doing what I just said and it still isn't working then I have no clue what could be wrong. What's happening when you try? And what exactly are you doing? Just copying and pasting? Because you might be accidentally copying something extra by accident...

Omnishifter

Omnishifter #14 · Jan 15th, 2020 · · · Challenge Accepted ·

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10035443
Oh wait, what filter do you have on Derpibooru? If you haven't enabled Mature artwork then you'd see nothing...

diablo4000

diablo4000 #15 · Jan 15th, 2020 · · · Challenge Accepted ·

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10035455
I copy paste as best as I could it a extra long link there, i did the double tt and still just takes me to Adagio pics but not that one.

Omnishifter

Omnishifter #16 · Jan 15th, 2020 · · · Challenge Accepted ·

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It should be in there, the third pic starting from the top left. Anyway, I guess I'll go with a direct link to the specific picture then
hxxps://derpibooru.org/images/1982945?q=artist%3Achigusa%2Cadagio+dazzle

laofuzi

laofuzi #17 · Jan 15th, 2020 · 3 · 1 · Challenge Accepted ·

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“Please,” you request firmly, back straight, chest out, eyes burning passionately, “I want you to be my girlfriend.”

If not, then how about friends with benefits?

“That’s not “caring.” That’s “babysitting.” She clarifies.

And yet you never get paid to do it!

To both your’s and her surprise, you see her face turn red at your claim; however, she quickly spins around, facing away from you, “Geez, just how big of a fuckin’ pervert are you!?”

Well, we were running out of stuff to say good things about you! It's all we ever could come up with!

"So, feel like sacking up or are you gonna chicken out, go home and fap to this delightful moment I’m sure you’ve already stored in your spank bank?”

Don't you mean sperm bank (or if you prefer, "spunk bank")?

Your nose presses against her back door, and you don't falter for a second. You take a whiff, and as you surmise, she smells just as exquisite there as the rest of her. Naturally, Adagio was properly clean; no way a girl of her caliber would leave a single spot of her blemished, dirty, or unkempt. That’s why you waste no time taking a tasty lick of her rosebud. “Oooh, fuck yeah, baby,” she purrs blissfully, “that’s more like it.”

You are a brown-noser!

“Years of practice, sweetness,” she purrs, sitting up and stretching her limbs. “Years of practice.”

Make that a millenia of practice---and hundreds of eloping, sex scandals, rapes and infidelity escapades!

“You did very, very good,” she giggles. “Almost didn’t think you were a virgin.”

Yeeeaaaahhhh, about that...

“Listen,” she says softly, but sternly. Your eyes meet hers. You see, the lust and passion still brimming on the surface, but find something beneath. Something, almost benign but just as powerful. Longing. “I’m not one to mince words, so I want us to have an understanding. I’m not the best when it comes to…relationship material. My longest-standing associations were one-night stands at best, and those were all…compromised by my own hand. You could be with a nice girl. A girl that isn’t notorious for manipulating and mistreating others. I’m fickle, greedy, haughty, and typically self-serving. But still…I…want to try.”

Like you said, can't support your goals or claims without action, right?

I don’t know your life before coming here, but I’m sure you’ve had your reasons for doing the things you’ve done. I know I’d like to know. I’d like to know more about you in general.

Dude, you have NO idea how much she's been through! In fact, she's completely not the same person she used to be! In fact, she's wasn't even born in this world!

“Yeah, Aria ate the last frozen taco,” Sonata cries out, “even though I called it!”
"So what? Your name wasn’t on it,” Aria bit back.

So what, do want her to paste post-it notes with Sonata's name over everything inside the house?!

“You can diddle yourself some other time, this is…” Aria’s comeback quickly dies down as she glares passed her sister towards you, “who da fuck is that?”

BUSSTTEEEDDD!!!!!

“Ohhhhh, new boyfriend?” Sonata giggles as she peered past her peeved sibling to look at you. “He’s cute! Hi!!!” She waves excitedly.

Go get your own mentally challenged f&&k-toy, Sonata!

Aria didn't get to finish her sentence as Adagio grabs her and Sonata by their hair and pulls them towards her. You cringe in your seat as you watch the two girls cry and whimper in your girl's grasp. "Do you have shit in your ears? I just said we finished fucking are trying to relax . Now let me be clear, you chattering whores. I don't care if you do this Russian roulette-style, figure this out yourself. If either of you bothers us again within the next hour, the only thing you both will be eating is the full load cum still in my ass! Am I clear?”

With NO salad ranch dressing!! This, she swears!!

"Aww, that's so cute," she cooed, "you honestly thought I was joking. Listen, honey, you’re new here, so let me tell you, if I were just a tiny bit lenient with them, this place would be utter chaos.”

I thought it was already chaotic

“Yes, you are,” she smiles, knowingly at him. “This body is your responsibility now, remember? You made this mess. You’re gonna clean it up.”

In return, YOU gotta lube his body up clean too!

She takes your hand and leads you towards the bathroom. You did it. Adagio fucking Dazzle is your girlfriend! You didn't just win this challenge. You killed it!

Next challenge: Marrying that ass and having kids with it!

Luminous Skies

Luminous Skies #18 · Jan 18th, 2020 · · · Prologue ·

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10035433
Who disliked this comment?! This is amazing!

laofuzi

laofuzi #19 · Jan 18th, 2020 · · · Challenge Accepted ·

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Probably the same people who have beef against my post-ending fanfiction

raw19

raw19 #20 · Jan 19th, 2020 · · · Challenge Accepted ·

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Mission Accomplished! Sugar Crush!

Most excellent.

Mzuark

Mzuark #21 · Jan 22nd, 2020 · 1 · · Challenge Accepted ·

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Well I'm sold on the picture alone

Oops door

Oops door #22 · Jan 24th, 2020 · 1 · · Challenge Accepted ·

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A true masterpiece

Mzuark

Mzuark #23 · Jan 26th, 2020 · 4 · 7 · Challenge Accepted ·

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Alright, if I have one criticism; You do that thing every writer does which is make their protagonist a perfect gentleman that has all these cheesy, heartwarming lines. Surely you can branch out, make the guy a sub or something or double down in Adagio being a dominant.

Of course I love the story. Build up AND sex were great.

Luminous Skies