This is a really is a fun read. Found a few writing hiccups, they weren't too distracting, but they did seem a little out of place. Reading this chapter also had me wanting to see more SpikexOctavia, that's a pairing that I haven't seen all that much.
I love Octavia's session way more! The fact that Octavia was new at this and wasn't sure how she should go about it and even feeling kinda insecure just had more charm for me.
He said before he moved the empty plate aside and pulled the glass bowl of small gem stones to him before grabbing
Her enamored train of thought seemed to have more of an effect on her as as her body began to tingle and heat up,
squeaking as she was pulled her from her thoughts.
She needs to be drained of her milk rather often,
“How could I say no to such a good friend?” he said with a smile.
The drake notice her body stiffened a bit under his grasp and he couldn’t help but chuckle.
Spike pulled his hands up and took hold of Octavia’s enormous mounds,
“Its fine, it just makes this a lot more fun,” Spike said as he moved his right thumb up to join his index and grabbed the edge of the pasties. “Ready?”
throwing her head back in pure ecstasy as her stiff nipple was finally set free of its confines.
Spike repeated the action, grabbing the other pasty and began pulling it loose form the grey mare’s person.
Spike looked up at her and smiled around ounce he pulled away, licking some of the excess milk from his lips.
her flow of love juices slowly dripping on the harden dragonhood,
Spike groaned as he felt Octavia grinding her pussy against him, but he quickly regained control of himself and focused on his task. Minutes passed and Octavia easily felt the swelling in her chest lessening, the same as her other. As much as she wanted this to continue,
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Just as Octavia was about to obtain sweet sexual release,
setting him down in the small in ground couch.
his upper one was up and thoroughly drenched in the cellist’s love nectar.
Allow me to make it up to you and return the favor.”
She didn’t even receive an answer before she dove in
Aaaaand I'm out.
Great story. Nothing at all wrong with it, just not used to this much graphicness I will give you a four hooves up though
Breaking Mares?
That could be a story title in the future.
This is a really is a fun read. Found a few writing hiccups, they weren't too distracting, but they did seem a little out of place. Reading this chapter also had me wanting to see more SpikexOctavia, that's a pairing that I haven't seen all that much.
I love Octavia's session way more! The fact that Octavia was new at this and wasn't sure how she should go about it and even feeling kinda insecure just had more charm for me.
Edit 11/26/2019: