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Chapters will be longer after this one, dont worry.
Read later, added. Seems intersting, so i'll start when you finish the whole story ^_^
Pretty good so far already faavorited
This sounds pretty good but there are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. Okay, not a lot. But a few. And missing capitalization. But otherwise it's a very interesting idea.
WHOA! Applejack...lying? If that's not a plot point nothing is.
potential. but along with it, there is always something. I sugest to dicribe more were the mane 6 are. show vs tell As they say.
This is an interesting story. I like it already. Please keep going. There are some things that I would like to mention to you in PM that looks like they need revision. :
Darn it ! I Was writing this kind of story!But it turned out to be a fail since I am writing this on my moms NO KEYBOARD phone .By the way , Im 12.
YEEEEEEEEEAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!
I'm liking the story so far, but the only thing that's shaking me off the story is why are they so okay about this? Maybe it's about how fast they are transitioning to learn about their new set of attributes, how not crazy they are being about it, or both. But yeah, I could imagine the whole gang freaking out from switching bodies. But anyways, pretty good story
I named this chapter after its confusion... If that makes any sense...
erned my attentions. good job
HAH! Ok this is going to be funny. Keep em' comming!
I havent noticed a lot of (Original) Twilight behaving differently, is there a reason for that?
Ta-da! the end! hope you liked it. Tell me how you liked it, please. Or how you didint like it. but, be nice. please.
748025 Wait what? Already the end? This makes me sad
I thought you would do something more epic, oh well, guess i will live.
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Twilight was resisting the magic. She was keeping her head for as long as she could. I guess he was so occupied in worrying about her friends that she didint notice it.
And im sorry I ended it so soon... But did you like it?
i cant wait until this is completed so i can read it!
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it is.
Hm.. I liked it. T'was decent. Spelling mistakes were noticeable and quite a bit frequent, as well as capitalization errors. Still good though. I would suggest giving them a once over, as in reading through them like a reader, and taking note of any mistakes. Other than that, good read!
flying training montage GO. *Eye of the Tiger plays in background*
another flying training montage GO *Eye of the tiger plays in the background*
i'm...confused now
what! already the end of the story. DARN! This story has the potential to be an epic adventure story
What happening to her friends? They are turning into each other, that's what.
That's it?! End of story? No more?
Nice story, but the ending was such a letdown.
>sudden ending detected
>Rage rising
>Initiating Doom3 to release rage
btw, I give you 3 out'a 5 stars
*Crossover fic*
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I knew this was gonna happen!No really I had a dream this
happened.
748477I cant believe I forgot how to write/post a story.Please remind me.
I had fun listening to this story. When you brought the the dialogue about Zecora, I suddenly predicted that it was poisoned joke. :
This was really good! But I don't think the "h word" at the end was necessary.
So... after last time... with the poison joke... and they stepped in it again... Why DIDN'T they think of that before?
Two quick questions:
1. Why is this story still marked Incomplete?
2. Why is this a Crossover?
Why is this still labeled "Incomplete"?
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crossover for crossing over the bodies
i just keep reading it, it's so good! but why was it so short? i have less to love now
The pacing goes by way too fast. No offense, I'm not very good at pacing either, the idea is awesome!
I'm still on the first chapter, so I'll tell you what I think when I'm done.
The question is if they fully turn into each other does that mean the real ones cease to exist and therefore die or does the transformation nullify the change they are going through due to them still existing even if they are not the original version of themselves... so much confusion!
Soooo... Now Fluttershy is honest and Applejack is...kind? Rarity is joyful and Pinkie is generous, Twi is...loyal and Rainbow is magical?