This story takes place a few years after the episodes stop running.
The mane six, and their last words and breaths, in applejack's view.
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Julyah
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this story was the most fun one to write, out of all of them.
I almost cried while writing it.
love all my fans!!!
and enjoy!!!
for the last few paragraphs of the story, maybe the whole one i want you to play this song : www.youtube.com/watch?v=uZ_7xq1TIW4
reminds me alot of One by One.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/14237/One-By-One
nice work
Awww! I was almost gonna tear up
god...when I finally get around to reading this I am going to hate you so much because I can already tell more than a few manly tears will be shed
404536 Agreed. Anyway Julyah, very well done. Granted I could echo an earlier comment about running it through a spellchecker, but the errors here are minor (And anythin' involvin' Applejack's take on somethin' is shore ta be a lil' rough on language
). A fittingly sad piece, and it really feels like something the mane 6 would do.
manly tears..they have been shed
Eye halve a spelling chequer
It came with my pea sea
It plainly marques four my revue
Miss steaks eye kin knot sea.
Eye strike a key and type a word
And weight four it two say
Weather eye am wrong oar write
It shows me strait a weigh.
As soon as a mist ache is maid
It nose bee fore two long
And eye can put the error rite
Its rare lea ever wrong.
Eye have run this poem threw it
I am shore your pleased two no
Its letter perfect awl the weigh
My chequer tolled me sew.
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lol that was my goal
awwwwww first fluttershy then rainbow
sad but awesome work
-crys- poor rarity
awwww!
-lightly crys- poor twilight sparkley
well nice story sad alittle bit
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yeah, that was the point of this story, to be a tear jerker. glad you like it
443912 yeah...
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hey not bad sorry for being mad at you when dash died you shes my idol but nice sad story
This was a nice story. I teared up with Twilight's death. Nice job.