I melt into the people I surround myself with. Don’t know who I am so I create a myth of someone who I disguise look in my eyes you’ll see no one.
Twilight is shocked when she learns that she and her friends weren't the first bearers of Harmony. She finds a journal in her castle from the tree explaining the lives of Angel, Sun Down, Free Range, Harper, Glade, and Mezzo. Twilight is curious to see what is discovered.
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It's never a good sign when a word in the title is spelled wrong.
Original*
How does one not know how to spell "original"?
Sorry, i came up with this idea at around midnight, I don't remember half the things I wrote. Fixing it now.
Good premise, I like it so far
Why would Angel give a physical description in the cover page? At least one that isn't accompanying a photo pasted in the inside cover that clarifiy's which pony she is.
Good story so far hope there is more soon
7044960 shhhh.... that comes later.....
so the earlier bearers are mixed gender, are we in general going to "see" more stallions from this journal?
7062831 My theory that the bearer has to have the right kind of personality and it has nothing to do with gender. And you might "see" more stallions, I'm not too sure yet.
Very interesting story, but you need to break up the diary entries with commentary from Twilight and Spike.
Possibly even the other present day characters.
ie- Twilight takes diary and shows Rarity.
or Rainbow Dash breaks through the library window as Twilight is reading.
If the entries are told as recounts - which is how diary entries are written - then the chapters might get boring unless kept relevant by the involvement of familiar characters.
7071166 That is a very good point, but remember. The last time we saw Twilight and Spike was at night when they were organizing the books. I do have plans for present day, but I want to put in one more chapter of the diary first. Believe me, this will be interesting especially in the last chapter or so. But you'll have to be patient, because this is going to be the longest fic I have ever written and probably ever will write.
Yep liking and faving this looks like it is going to be good, I think it would be awesome if the old elements and the new somehow meet through the magic of the elements that they bare
7296164 That would be a good idea, maybe I'll hold onto it. But I'm afraid this is a more tragic story than that...
Well, this sounds like a fun ride. I wonder what kinds of adventures our new mane 6 will go on...
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I've been in a sort of writer's block with this one for a while. I want to continue it, and I know exactly what I want to happen in it, I just can't put it down in words. Plus this is going to be my longest story ever on Fimfiction, so it's going to be interesting
Should I be looking forward to a romance?
Or old I just go cry in my corner and curse my foreveralone life?
*squee*
The romance. I love it.
And that song! Did you write it or is it from something?
I like how a lot of the things we find normal in the show are questioned in the past (dragons cooking, homosexuality, etc.). It shows the growth of the world.
Good job.
I have a few ideas for how this could go, but I'm not sure what you have planned, so I'll read on and see where this goes. I can't wait to see.
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Well, if you want an idea or two, I'm here for you.
Anyway, I've got a few ideas of my own that I want to write about, and a special project I want to get to. I'll shoot you a PM about it in a few minutes.
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Maybe there will be romance
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Yes it is completely original!!
And I tried to add a few things like that just because I wanted an honest difference between the show and the past, I'm glad you like it!!!