Bombs, shelters, killing spells, guns, death, and destruction. War has come to Equestria and no pony was ready. Celestia had to think of something fast, so she enlisted all her top forces: The Day Guard, The Night Guard, The Wonderbolts, and the Elements of Harmony. And the ponies left behind are devastated that their loved ones are to go to the war and fight in the front lines. While they are stuck waiting for a sign that the war is over
This is a story not focusing on a war itself, but the view of those not apart of it, but still affected by it.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=PYzRbdHvb3s
Problem solved!
Well...crap
7717295 How would that be 'problem solved'? I'm genuinely curious because I can't see your line of thinking. Enlighten me??
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Im assuming you've never seen Friendship is Witchcraft, have you?
7717507 I have, I just don't know what it has to do with my story... so I'm confused...
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Your story is about a war that Apple Jack was in, and the song is about how Apple Jack won the war? I just saw an opportunity to make a reference that people would actually get :/
7717519 Ah! I get it! That's good!!
Uh... um... is this really what a draft is like...? Jeez... I'm glad there are no major wars right now... I don't think I could say goodbye to my loved ones like this...
Brilliant work, friend... If I weren't in public, I might be shedding tears right now. I know there are other chapters, and I'm dreading reading them, but I know I have to, now...
Please tell me every pony comes back alright!
This chapter held the morbid melancholy that a town ravaged by war would hold... it's a sad fact...
I look forward to what the next chapters might hold.
P.S. while reading this story I realized something about your My Sister story. What if Rainbow hangs out with Scoots because she knows that Scoots was abandoned and neglected just like Air was?
Food for thought.
I honestly didn't think that rainbow would be the first to go, but it makes a lot of sense. She would be on the front lines, probably with the Wonderbolts or something. I wonder what positions the other mane 6 are filling and if they're in immediate danger, as well...
A simple, sad ending.... I truly felt for this one. Just something about the loss of war...
Well, on to the next. At least, as a reader, I can move on to another world where everything is and there's a happier ending.
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CALM DOWN!!! I'm glad you're enjoying my work, but you didn't have to comment on EVERY STORY I DID!! I don't know if your making a point, or just genuine about what I write!! either way, I appreciate the effort!
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Glad you caught that! Her helping with Scootaloo is really her way of redeeming herself with Air, at least in my eyes. Though she knows that it will never be the same, she feels obligated to Scootaloo because of that fact alone. Rainbow feels like she didn't do enough for Air, so she is trying to do everything for Scootaloo.
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Well, I dunno.
I guess I thought the more feedback the better.
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Then write a chapter about it!
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My Sister- Air Whip is a completed story, if you want, you can write a continuation of the story or someone you know, as long as I get credited as the original creator of the original ideas, I'm fine with it.
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Honestly, I've thought about it! But, it was your idea and I didn't want to step on any toes.
Anyway, I'll see what I can do--though I don't know if I'll get around to it... I do have my own projects to work on.
Well, if I do make something up, I'll be sure credit you in the description and A/N.