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Pinkieappleflutter


I melt into the people I surround myself with. Don’t know who I am so I create a myth of someone who I disguise look in my eyes you’ll see no one.

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This story is a sequel to The War


It's been a few months since the ponies won the war against the Yaks and Griffons, and every pony is stiff affected by it. Though the war is over, they are all trying to get used to what the new normal is while still trying to deal with the affects of the war. For Apple Jack, this means staying on the farm and working as much as she can to forget everything. She can't fall asleep because with sleep comes dreams, and with dreams comes reliving the war. Sleep is bad, sleep is very bad.
This is on hiatus until further notice

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 6 )

This is bound to be a heavy roller coaster of emotions and loss. Like a train wreck, I don't want to watch but I can't look away. I swear, if this doesn't end on a relatively happy note, I'm going to flip.

7952181 Awe, Goldie... We'll see now, won't we?? :rainbowlaugh: :ajsmug:

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:rainbowderp: You're gonna make me flip on purpose now, aren't you?! :rainbowhuh:

You devious, devious author, you... :rainbowkiss:

7952181
I totally agree with my relative on that one. :ajsleepy:

Applejack is one word. Also, how can something be "stiff affected" by something?

8014048 Thank you so much for your input. I will take your suggestion and think upon it. But, from now on, could you please comment more useful feed back? Like thought and feelings of the overall chapter/story, or something I could improve on to make the overall story more enjoyable to read. It helps me a great deal more than what you have been commenting about my stories recently. Thank you.

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