[Reminder: This is HUMAN Sunset, not Sunset from Equestria.]
Sunrise Light and Sunset Shimmer were the best of friends when they were little. One day, Sunset left and they didn't talk again..until 12 years later. What happened, and what will happen to their friendship? Or..will they become something more than friends?
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Cover art drawn by Snow Bullet !
A big thank you to my editors and proofreaders:
SolarEclipse912
Meeee
Grand Muff Ragga_Muffin
Also, a big thank you to all of the PoME CP authors that let me use their OC's in the (or later in) the story! Go check out their stories:
The Glimmer in the Snow by Snow Bullet
Don't Sugarcoat It by Lunar Shadow
Love Behind a Lie by Heavenly Quill
Through my Soul and Through your Heart by FrostGuardian
Bittersweet Romance by SkeletonsInYerCloset
(Also, another big thank you to BlueSun52 for letting me use human Sunset for my story!)
Excellent start. The only thing I'd change would be the large gap at the en. Aside from that, it's looks great.
7041128
okay, thank you!
great chapter sun! the last start was good, but this is even better.
7041581
thank you!
7057418
thank you! new chapter on Saturday hopefully!
Already this is leagues better than your first draft. I still have some issues with the pacing, and the environment-building is a little simplistic, but I wasn't expecting Faulkner. This is a fine prologue and one I'm willing to continue reading. Good job.
Will there be a chapter two?
7145277
yes, there will. a lot of personal things in my life have been happening, and I have not been able to update. expect another update in a week or two. I'm sorry I haven't updated in a while, I hope you understand.
Nice chapter
7173965
thank you!
Nice chapter. Can't wait to see what comes next.
nice chapter sun, the pacing is still a bit off but because its still early in the story and nothing too significant happened its not really too big of a deal.
Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next!
7183791
thank you!
WHY AM I SO JEALOUS OF YOUR COVER ART???
7245737 DAMN IT SNOW GO WORK ON YOUR CHAPTER.
7306519 I AM
Glad to see the two getting along.
I'm surprised the Shadow 5 haven't gotten to them.
7306519 I should get to work on mine, just have to get my job settled in first.
Nice chapter
great job sun! I look forward to the next chapter!
mise: I wonder how high those two are going to jump when the see my car
Octavia: if you do anything to purposefully scare them, you're sleeping on the couch
Why is it cancelled?