Sunset decides to dress up as a demon for a Nightmare Night party. Her fellow students don't handle it all that well and now Sunset has to deal with her unwanted reign.
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I had a very similar idea to this but it was more or less a situation of a magic item Sunset finds and keeps locked up basically splitting her in two Nutty Professor style. Sunset in this moment loses her edge but is also no longer held down by the weighted guilt of her past. Meanwhile Demon Sunset(In my version she's called Scarlet Sundown) tries living it up without Sunset only to quickly find out that no one really wants to be her friend that is until she runs into Sci-Twi and has a talk with Midnight Sparkle.
This was a cute little story
what was sunset expecting to happen?
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That they remember Halloween and realize just a costume. If pinkie hadn't been trying to help it might have gone better.
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Maybe. It might have had something to do with trauma.
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Who knows? Pinkie idea of fun is nuts. You think that after a bit they would have noticed nothing bad was happening but they kept insisting on a demon queen. I wish they knew how to make up their minds considering they don't want a demon queen but keep insisting that sunset play the part.
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Are you talking about the students or the rainbooms?
Yeah that checks out.
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The students were falling all over themselves not have the demon do anything to them but every time she tried to tell just a costume and she didn't want anyone doing this stuff they refused to listen and insisted on doing it or something similar.
ha ha
MURPHY'S LAW, TWILIGHT. SUNSET ALREADY TEMPTED HIM ONCE, DON'T TRY IT AGAIN!
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That is true. I’m pretty sure they still believe it by the end of the story.
I'm not sure what I love more, Rarity being frighteningly good at being an evil overlady or Pinkie's attempt to take over the town. In any case, delightful madness. And they should all be thankful that Twilight turned down Rarity's suggestion for a companion piece...
I'm getting a lot of "I'm not the Messiah" vibes.
This is great.
Aaahhhhh hahaha! Good work on this one!
This is simply amazing.
Nothing wrong with a Vampire costume. Unless your cosplaying Twilight. In which case, might want to watch a better movies series instead.
Pinkie Pie Perfection Part 1
Pinkie Pie Perfection Part 2! (Also, gross.)
Pinkie Pie Perfection Part 3
Gosh, that's super cute, and a very Sunset thing to do! A lot of this story involves Sunset doing very Sunset things.
Aaaaahh, Pinkie Pie Perfection Part 4!!!
The only thing missing here would be the revelation that she microwaved it in a plastic plate, too. Anyway, Pinkie Pie Perfection Part 5.
Of course.
Welp, that explains why she didn't just take it off.
Overall
This was well-written and really cute. Most of the girls were written nicely in character, and I enjoyed their personalities really coming through the little bits of dialogue. Great job at showing and not telling. Definitely glad I read this! Thanks for the laughs.
Final
Pinkie Pie Perfection Points Tally Total: 5
Final Rating: 5/5 Pinkie Pie Perfection, 10/10 Adorable Sunset
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Glad you liked it.
Wonderful piece of madness, Holy. I was grinning like an idiot the entire read.
Meanwhile, three other teenage girls suddenly sneezed...
Is this some call forward to the Costume Conundrum short where Sunset does go to Bulk Biceps' costume party as a vampire, implying that happens a year after this story?