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MrHouston


Anime, video games, monster movies, and creepypastas are what I am

Comments ( 61 )

Jason Vorhees meets mlp is basically what this story is

I like this story. I hope you can make this into something great.

Is Jason going to be in this

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No but I bet you'll get your fill with my "Jason vs" stories :raritywink:

Get an editor to help you with this. When I can see grammatical errors in title card synopsis it is pretty much a clear indicator that one is needed.

With that said, I will check back in a few weeks to see if it has been cleaned up any. Reserving my up or down vote till then.

7049127 Don't take it the wrong way. I am not saying this to be a jerk, but saying this because this story has uniqueness and potential. If I thought there was absolutely nothing worthwhile or salvageable about your tale I wouldn't even bother to offer advice. Having someone to provide editing/proofreading to catch spelling, capitalization and other grammatical errors (perhaps even acting as a sounding board to see if any ideas you might add to the story make sense or should be passed over) will help polish up your 'gem' of a story and make it shine all the brighter.

For the longest freaking time I didn't notice the sequel note didn't work :twilightblush: Its updated so now you guys will know

ok I used to be a proofreader in the Jason vs, (still am offering services) but I'm curious as to how this is still in the Jason vs series when Jason is still dead.

7051004 Maybe the book has something too do with Jason

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Its in the same universe I made for it :pinkiehappy: the Senketsu Storyline. Basically Sombra v Jason onward are part of the same universe, just going further in time. Even though Jason is dead, it doesn't mean more slashers wont show up to take his place. Who knows, our favorite hockey mask killer might show up again in the future :ajsmug:

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Jason does play a significant role in the Senketsu Storyline. But he's not a main character in this one

Wait what happened to Leatherface? and Jason for that matter. I know he was with NM but then he got swept away. So I'm wondering what happened to him and whats NM going to do about it?

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Leatherface will come back in a chapter or so don't worry about that. :twilightsmile: Meanwhile, Jason was swept away by a trans-dimensional portal. Taking through space and possibly time. So Jason could end up anywhere or anytime or he might be lost forever. Nightmare Moon on the other hand will appear VERY soon :pinkiecrazy:

Man i hope these guys learn that if Dawn stays away from Pumpkinhead for too long he'll die and also that he needs Dawn so that he has a purpose.

Oh shit this is getting good...Also I can't wait for NM to reveal herself to the others and ask for help to find Jason

Wait a minute did Leatherface know Jason? when did that happen? I mean that the story of Leatherface is surprisingly real while Jason Voorhees is a made up character so somebody please explain cuse I'm confused

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Jason and Leatherface relationship is based off an actual crossover comic back in the 90s.

7353033 I honestly don't know that I didn't read comics as a kid surprisingly :facehoof:

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It was a VERY adult comic so I don't blame you :twilightblush:

7353231 let me rephrase that. I didn't read ANY comics until freshman year
Side note: Do you think you can send me a pic/link to reading this comic

Dude you seriously need someone to edit these stories, you're using their when it's supposed to be there. It's not a bad premise but it's the grammar and spelling that's really getting to me.

"YOU SHALL NOT PASS!"

I suddenly want to watch Lord of the rings now.

wait a slasher movie character who kills zombies were have I heard this (cough, cough "ash Williams" cough)

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Not to mention zombies from the necronamicon :D

............................................yep

This is just to good. Keep up the good work dude.

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Surprises around every corner :trollestia:

7624879 hmmm. I'm surprised no one is wondering where Rarity and Spike are.

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*Insert ending theme of a TV show* Tune in next time to see what Rarity, Spike, and Leatherface have gotten themselves into!

7625627 *inserts new tv show ending* How about Jason? Will Nightmare Moon find her possible Love or will Jason be killed permanently?

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Tune in next time for The Book of Darkness!
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I seriously wish I could make these stories into comics

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7658888 the guy is Leatherface from The Texas Chainsaw Massacre movies and the dlc of MKXL

7659513 I know LeatherFace was there. I meant the guy in the cloak

Has leather face dealt with hordes and zombies before or something:rainbowhuh:

"Mister P!"

i feel like that's a Bioshock reference.

So Dawn and Trixie accidentally summoned Pumpkinhead and don't realize it or who he is and what he does? That's gonna be awkward to explain if the guy can actually speak or not.

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In this Pumpkinhead can speak but only in his own language and if he chooses.

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