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Timeless Lord Slayer


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First chapter went by fast, bro. Also, this:

a genuine diamond sword

I asked how much it was worth.

"Ten bucks," he answered.

A genuine sword made of fucking DIAMONDS sells for ten bucks?

Did that not ring any alarm bells in this kid's head? Does he have none whatsoever? And twenty minutes after arriving in a new land - with only an passing academic understanding of what he's become - he tells two demigoddesses in the middle of their base of power to fuck off or be killed? Did he make any attempt to think any of this through? Don't get up, I have the answer right here:

But you only posted the first chapter of the story a little bit ago, so... I dunno. You've got a lot of time to iron out those kinks. Work on your pacing maybe?

I got a little carried away....I'll be coming back to this story soon enough to fix things. Until next time!

I love it! I must have more! And a sequel where he is reformed!:pinkiehappy:

unbelievably amazing story please continue i like to see where this goes

I advise changing the scene in which he stats a war completely unprovoked with two goddesses in their centre of power for no apparent reason except for acting as Herobrine. I men you can be Herobrine, but there are smarter ways to go about it.

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Yeah...I kinda ran out of ideas on that one...but next chapter I promise he'll be more reasonable.

I like it. A fanfic about Herobrine. If it took that many people to take him down he must've been in creative mode, either that or he just kept respawning. Either way, hope you continue:twilightsmile:.

Though he kind of attacks the princesses for no reason there.

Strange little fight, but satisfying. I do want to see all of the mobs in a siege so I hope the next chapter is good.

5957565 You'll be getting something else, as well. I won't say what, but I think you'll like it.

LOL Monty Python! All Hail the Holy Grail!!

:moustache:

hmm I might say Jerk instead of fiend... Plus I might try to hit you with an arrow before you poofed away! I'm adding the arrow part to my half but I'll keep the "fiend" until/unless you change it!

:moustache:

I'm gonna guess Herobrine is the Anti-God of Minecraft seeing how he's Notch "brother" or something...
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Herobrine. The Spirit Of Minecraft. I Admit To Being Interested In What The Future Holds For Him.

Best Regards,
Prophet_Of_Madness

6088154 Thanks, I'll try to live up to your expectations!

Im unsure who is the most evil displaced, but herobrine is definitely near the top.

I'm gonna picture with human faces and Mew's hair. That is, hair so fine it is nearly microscopic and can't really be felt, just velvety. Otherwise it's furry, which... just no.

7323790 Sorry, accidentally published an unfinished chapter.

Nice job with the chapter! :pinkiehappy: Still can't believe I'm in there :twilightsmile:

7328114 Thanks, I try. I do hope I lived up to your expectations.

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How did you manage to get your OC in there?

8128903 yes I like hero's and the balance tip but evil or super evil ones I do not like so when I saw it and read it I was so dish up pointed yes I no there is good and evil but it I did not like sorry.

What was the song he was singing? or was it written by you?

Comment posted by Timeless Lord Slayer deleted Sep 19th, 2017

hey just wish to know is this story getting worked on or is it on hold

10081164 Oh, apologies, I forgot to change it's status. It has been canceled. Sorry.

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