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An powerful pony has been wondering Equestria looking for a purpose in his life. He wishes to help ponies but they will only fear or hate him. Will the Rider still want to help everypony? Or will he give up and leave them to die in thier time of need. Ponies will die, tempers will flair, Will this supernatural being sacrifice his life for his friends? One begs the answer, friend or foe?
Find out in the crossover story, Ghost Pony Rider!
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I'll just leave this here:
I really have high hopes for this, good luck.
Mother of god nooooooooq
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nooooooooq? What does that mean?
5194427 it mean what ever you think it means
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okay...
5198196 indeed
5176000 hail luna!
Sir/madame, I'm sorry.
It was good for a while but then you added "Also" into the chapter and it just kills my metaphorical boner for reading.
I believed his Pony name is always Ghost Rider, dispite him not riding anything. The ghost rider doesn't really 'settle down' either, friendly or not.
If anything he should have died in the desert, betrayed by his friends. Comes back and seeks revenge. As well as kill any criminal in the desert/wasteland.
(Might want to make up a few towns as well)
In summary, it was good, then you added "also",killed my metaphorical boner, so now I'm going to bed.
(Yes I understand its to early to judge the story, but just putting "also" ruins it. Again sorry)
Ghost Pony Rider Theme Song:
this should be "STAY AWAY FROM ME!" She said in a terrified voice.
this should be It scraped the ground making indented marks the size of rulers.
this should be Twilight yelled past the menacing wood wolf trying to get Spike out of his daze.
This should be Spike was too scared to move. The reason for this change is because the definition of too is: to a higher degree than is desirable, permissible, or possible; excessively, while the definition of to is: expressing motion in the direction of (a particular location).
this should be Twilight stared to lose consciousness.
This should be Without another interruption, it turned to finish the job.
This should be Then without warning a chain came crashing through the wall and it wrapped around the neck and arms of the mighty wood wolf.
This should be The wolf yelped in pain at the burning metal of the chain.
This should be Pieces of the wolf scattered around everywhere making a blender look like duster.
This should be Twilight and Spike continued to listen as the struggle became smaller and quieter and less sounds came from the wolf.
This should be The large stallion stood upon the corpse eating a blue mist coming from it.
This should be an orange and red flame emerged from its head. The reason for this change is because the definition of the word orientating is to orient. The website that I got that information from is http://www.thefreedictionary.com/orientating. The definition of the word “orient” is: To locate or place in a particular relation to the points of the compass, or To locate or position so as to face the east, or To build (a church) with the nave laid out in an east-west direction and the main altar usually at the eastern end, or To align or position with respect to a point or system of reference, or To determine the bearings of, or To make familiar with or adjusted to facts, principles, or a situation, or To focus (the content of a story or film, for example) toward the concerns and interests of a specific group, or To turn toward the east, or To become adjusted or aligned. While the definition of the word "emerged" is To rise from or as if from immersion, or To come forth from obscurity, or To become evident, or To come into existence.
This should be He moaned a rasped sentence that sounded like he was a ghost with no energy. The reason for this change is because rasperly is not a real word, and rasped works just as well here.
This should be The being looked behind him to see the struggling mare that was gasping for breath.
This should be "Who are you?" Twilight asked in a scared position.
This should be With great strength, he lifted her up like she was nothing but a pencil.
This should be Twilight stuttered, she lifted the book with her horn's magic and brought it toward her.
This would never happen. He protects the innocent, he doesn't unnecessarily scare them. The only way that he would yell at innocent people like that is if he knew that a threat was somewhere close by (and even then, it would have to be something heavy-duty [for example, The Incredible Hulk on a rampage]. Also, if you insist on having the scene in your story (which you can, I'm just saying that the Ghost Rider canon doesn't support your scene) the word menacing is misspelled as menecing.
I have been waiting for this story!
The title had me so confused at first. I was thinking of a person who rode the ghosts of dead ponies.
I'm starting to have seizures under these fucking spelling errors and grammar mistakes.
*SEIZURING OVER THE POOR SPELLING AND GRAMMAR*
She had to say it didn't she.
That four word phrase.
Now I know things will go from bad to shit.
Luna Testing Ghost Rider Pony? That's a new one even for me.
spectacular story my friend love ghost rider and now have more love for the stories done for him.
Ok, I just started reading and already somethings blaring at me.
This isn't a story, it's more of a list of things to do.
What you've got is this:
She did this, then she did that, then she did this.
You shouldn't do that. That's literally the biggest mistake you can do in a story.
Add content and character to it:
She did this like this, before she did that feeling like this, she did not want to do that, but she had to.
See how it's longer? It has more content, it has more character, it's more interesting.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
PROOFREAD YOUR SHIT!
"Oh gosh, that fellers on fire!" She ran to her home and got a pale of water.
Hahah that kind of reminded me of spongebob reacting to Sandy's Christmas tree
Queen Crysalise
I don't think you spelled that correctly
The ending made me get teary eyed
How do they kiss with no lips
Before I read this, what is the Gore and Dark tag for ?
no logic in your story bro..
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HAHAHA LMAO I CAN’T BREATH
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that's a good question
The other comment covered everything so I'll just say this.
Great story but had to read as each line is like starting a new sentence.
Twilight sat on the chair, twilight used her magic, twilight brought the book over to get.
That needs to be fixed to.much saying of their names.
Twilight sat on the chair and with the use of her magic brought the book over to her.
That's my only problem with the story other than fighting to keep my attention with only mentioning their names and no use of pronouns or conjunctions. It's a good read.
Pfft, good luck with that.
I'm pretty sure the Ghost Rider wouldn't give a crap about someone being attacked by a wild animal. Or wild animal-plant-thing. They are ultra focused on vengeance for the innocent. Sure, they'll save an innocent they encounter if under attack by a sinner, but otherwise it isn't probable. Even if there is a hostage, the Ghost Rider is likely to simply keep going anyway, focused more on vengeance than on saving the hostage. That sort of focus even became a somewhat recent matter in the Ghost Rider comics that heavily influenced the comic.
Really Twilight? Sometimes your smart, other times your a complete dumbass.
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A man of culture I see good
DON'T EVER SAY THAT!!!!!
Spelled her name wrong.
Chrysalis
Ahh... So Discord is the devil
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Chill! Don't need to go all salty...
Well, Rider could've killed everyone, cuz no one is perfect, even if you sin a little ur pretty much dead if Rider finds you. So... Luna u should be grateful he didn't use the Penance Stare on you.
Ugh, pardon me but... I'm disappointed... Ghost Rider is the spirit of Vengeance, aka ex-spirit of justice... And HE'S GETTING JUDGED?! WTF
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Easy, they morph into pony form.
I would have thought Spike would out of desperation light the wolf on fire.
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No. In the first movie he came across a scene where a girl was about to be mugged. He came to her rescue and gave said mugger the penance stare. I don’t see that as vengeance. Also when Johnny Blaze got thrown in jail there were other prisoners around him that harassed him. However, there was one that attempted to stick up for him. That resulted in him becoming Ghost Rider and took them all down. That is except the one who tried to to stick up for him. He just left the cell saying to the kid that didn’t harass him “You. Innocent”
Oh sweet Celestia, that was one of the scariest moments that you could ever find in your life.