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CreatureofTheNight

An internet reviewer and lover of MLP. That's all I got to say Creature of the Night out

CreatureofTheNight Joined 25th Sep, 2014 · Offline

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Midnight Phoenix
Midnight Phoenix #1 · Mar 27th, 2016 · · ·
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Alright so... I read this and I really liked every part of it. However, one thing I didnt like was the grammar. I saw a few mistakes in spelling that you might want to revisit. I also got confused cause I think you mixed up "him" with "her" in some parts. Other than that, good story.

CreatureofTheNight
CreatureofTheNight #2 · Mar 27th, 2016 · · ·
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7067266

Yeah, I wouldn't mind having some help with Grammer, problem is not a lot of people line up to do clop stories now a days.

Midnight Phoenix
Midnight Phoenix #3 · Mar 27th, 2016 · · ·
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7067743 Well, I'd be willing to be your proofreader if you want.

CreatureofTheNight
CreatureofTheNight #4 · Mar 27th, 2016 · · ·
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7068787

I would like that. This is meant to be my 50th follower special

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