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Pete100

Pete100 #1 · Aug 3rd, 2021 · · · Outcasts ·

She had no reasons, no idea, and no logic to explain any of it. She just decided to...stay. There was no motivation beyond that. However, the toll was starting to get to her. People don't forget, especially when you do something horrible. Without her friends beside her, she had no support. The school was merciless to her, reviling her, jeering her, and pulling "pranks" that bordered on assault at best, and violating at worse. She'd go to the teachers, and they brushed it off as lies. She went to the principle, but Principle Celestia was not forgiving, and basically only issued warnings. That's all she ever did was warnings. Letting out a heavy sigh, Adagio looked up. She saw the famous Rainbooms, plus their new friend Twilight, they were minding their own business, not a care in the world. Why would they care? Who cares about about a "villain"?

Let’s be honest, is this really a surprise? We all already know how useless the adults are.

As the two walked down, they paused as they were staring face to face with Principle Celestia, Adagio hid behind Anon as Anon stood his ground ready for a fight if he had to. "This has gone to far." Celestia said to them calmly "I let things slide against you for to long. I was still bitter, still angry about what you did to us." She sighed "You have my deepest apologies, and Anon...thank you."

I can think of three different places that she could shove that apology.

Anon patted her back as he saw her tearing up, saying "They sound like more than just that" which caused Adagio to look away "They were your friends, weren't they?" there was a brief moment of silence as his new roommate slowly nodded, "Well, now you have a fourth one."

Doesn’t he mean third friend?

However they were interupted by the approaching Rainbooms, their leader Sunset Shimmer, another former bad girl, approached them saying "Adagio, we may have our differences but, I saw yesterday how bad it got. I am so sorry"

Weren’t they laughing?

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #2 · Aug 3rd, 2021 · · · Outcasts ·

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Yeah, I feel like that both Celestia, and the Rainbooms are the absolute WORST over here!!!

I get that the Dazzlings are the Villains! But, wasn't Sunset the same damn thing?! And why do they condone bullying, and even suicide???!!!!

I just think that they should get a huge slap or a punch to the face. And Celestia should be in huge trouble with the school board for this!!!!

>:-)

Pete100

Pete100 #3 · Aug 3rd, 2021 · · · Outcasts ·

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FACTS! That would not be me in that situation. The Rainbooms and Celestia would have to run those hands.

I honestly find it hilarious that the rainbooms were laughing, but if you did the same thing to sunset or twilight, then they would be quick to try and defend them.

Honestly, as much as I would love for that to happen I’m glad adagio didn’t do it. She had the opportunity to call out the rainbooms and celestia, but she chose not to. That shows some high maturity that no one in that school will reach.

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #4 · Aug 3rd, 2021 · · · Outcasts ·

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Anon should be the one to actually do it, and bash them all out for their hypocrisy, and being NO better people themselves.

And by "bashing", I'm not talking about the physical assault. I meant talking down on them, and make them feel ashamed of themselves.

Pete100

Pete100 #5 · Aug 3rd, 2021 · 1 · · Outcasts ·

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Especially since you have worse people in your friend group.

CreatureofTheNight

CreatureofTheNight #6 · Aug 3rd, 2021 · · · Under a Spell. ·

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I wanted to thank you again for inspriing me to write a part two to this story. I really thought this was going to be a one and done. Thanks for the inspiration.

Pete100

Pete100 #7 · Aug 3rd, 2021 · · · Under a Spell. ·

"Save it!" Adagio stated firmly. "I told you it was okay. To be honest, I kind of needed a reality check after everything"

How is it possible that adagio has had more character growth in these two chapters than any of the rainbooms in canon?

Sunset said "I'm a bit jealous of you I won't lie. Every boy I've dated so far apparently just wanted the "I banged a rockstar reward" none ever called me back."

The irony.

Pete100

Pete100 #8 · Aug 3rd, 2021 · · · Under a Spell. ·

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I don’t know what we did, but we’re glad we helped.

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