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TheDimensionRift


"Behold the turtle!" -TheDimensionRift 2016. I'm a die hard Naruto fan and enjoy DBZ (TFS/Origin) and many other animes. I love all genres of music and hope to be a sound engineer. *BEAT-BOXES*

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(CURRENTLY A WORK IN PROGRESS. LOOKING FOR FEEDBACK)

You've traveled all over Equeastria; working your way from Manehatten through Fillydelphia in search of the cutie mark you have yet to receive. After stopping in Baltimare for a few days, you learn of a town which is known for...."unique" events which transpired in the past. Hearing this, you quickly head for the nearest train station and head towards the center of Equeastria, unaware that your journey will lead to you finding more than just your cutie mark.

Race? Gender? Job?
Love interest(/interests)?
Help to protect Equeastria or bring about its destruction?

Every decision is up to you.

Chapters (36)
Comments ( 32 )

I like the premise so far, but... where exactly do I go from here?

There's no link at the bottom, and the next chapter is for a pegasus character... and I'm a unicorn.

Wow, I can't believe someone actually did it.

Honestly, this is something I have wanted to do for forever, but I never got around to it :twilightsheepish:

Flirt with the her

Might want to change that

Jesus, this goes way deeper than being just a story. :twilightoops:
Its a mini RPG!

You just literally got owned by a cloud. A CLOUD!

:rainbowlaugh:

You can't tell me what to do story!
:flutterrage:
Screw your rules!

"I'MA FIRIN MAH LAZER!!!!"

Dang, first the troll face on the cloud and now that.
You really like old memes don't you?
I like it!

Either you forgot the link at the end of this one, or you haven't written the next chapter yet.
If you haven't, you might want to put a "Coming soon" at the end to make sure people don't get confused.
Also, I'm going to use my comments as bookmarks to see where I left off, as if you follow this story, all the chapters you didn't read will show up in your updates.

EDIT: Congratz on getting featured!

How this got past moderation we may never know. But hopefully it stays past it!

10/10 Would tell Rainbow Dash my name again.

Weren't CYOA stories banned a few years back?

OK, I chose unicorn but now I'm not sure where to click to.

*Facepalms* I'm going through all of this just to see everything, and this story is great. It's funny and quirky and I love it. ~:derpyderp2:

*hehe* I was hoping this would happen eventually.

Morgan Freeman is immortal, therefore he is greater than god. (God is dead)[Also I'm an atheist so don't get on my case]

Yay!!!!!!!!!!!! A new cyoa story! Can't wait to make my first choice!

Order Ice Cream

:pinkiegasp: this one's a toughie!

But in all seriousness, so far so good.

Wow, was not expecting this. You now hold my full attention.

Never flirt when you're tired. I'm glad I picked this option.

We're getting Anon involved in this? Alright then, wasn't expecting that either.

So this is it for now, uh? At least it didn't end in the middle of an action sequence.

Anyways, so far so good! Thumbs up, favorite, and a follow! You deserve it.

Comment posted by Phonyyx deleted Mar 5th, 2017

7996329 wait, CYOA storys gor banned? What for?

7997760 They were at one point, I wasn't clear on the why myself. But hey, if the story is still up it's probably fine now.

Comment posted by Weavinglights deleted Mar 7th, 2017

C'mon, I just want to see what happens!

My curiosity has been satisfied.

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This may be very late, but I learned that you need to jump to chapter 35 from here.
You aren't missing much since the story isn't finished (obviously), but i guess you can take a look.

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I know, where is the link?

Ummm where does the story go from here?

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