Just started reading earlier today before you posted the two alternate endings, and to be honest I only had one thought throughout the entire thing.
"What the hay am I reading?"
I'm... really, really not sure how I'm supposed to react to all this. This story pretty much made my emotional spectrum more varied then Rainbow Dash's colors. In the end though, I'll admit that it was an awesome (if horrifying) read.
In conclusion, I think this story is definitive proof of something I've suspected since I learned about FiM; Celestia browses 4chan. That's the only explanation for her knowing about the phrase "wincest".
The second one was absolutely hilarious. Also I like how Twilight gets utterly broken in one and is implied to get raped multiple times (and thus probably broken) in the other. Finally seeing one psychologically broken after the main story has them basically act as if they weren't raped at all (except for wanting to stop Molestia) is nice.
No alt where the CMC and Trixie (preferably with Luna and Twilight getting a second helping in a rape foursome the epicness of which makes for an amazing climax to the story before the elements come in) are raped? I am disappointed, but those would take a while to write or else be too short...are these two the only alternates we will see?
Just needs a spelling/grammar cleanup and it's golden. The premise is ridiculously hilarious and kept me coming back for more, but the various problems with capitalization, spelling, and the like hurt it. A solid 4 from me!
2753 I have just finished going through and making a whole bunch of grammar/spelling corrections, as well as adding italics in multiple places where they weren't before. Should be better now.
Alright I don't remember the president streaking across the golden gate bridge because it was April fools. Sorry but alternate ending 2 got lost somewhere between pinkies thighs and big Macs dick
Alternate ending #2 was awesome and, well to be honest confusing. WHY would anypony go around molesting everyone she knows and then announce it's was just APRIL FOALS!
alt 2.... such trolling... it shouldn't be conceivably possible! *curls into fetal position and rocks back and forth* Find a happy place... find a happy place... find a happy place... *continues indefinitely*
Confusion about alt 2...the guards said they'd known about molestia for centuries, but seemed too shocked to be in on the prank. So how did molestia not exist. She couldnt of been planning for centuries.
the second one is better to me, but both are good. also i have no idea why I liked this and was not disturbed by it in the slightest.
Overall I'm caught between exasperation, humor and horror.
Is it just me or does Twilight Sparkle's last lines in ending #2 sound like they're being read by Moss off The IT Crowd?
Uh Celestia? I think you broke Twilight.
And that's when Twilight exploded.
Followed by exploding once more, for good measure.
I remember these from the IRC chat. They're even better in writing form! Got anymore?
Just started reading earlier today before you posted the two alternate endings, and to be honest I only had one thought throughout the entire thing.
"What the hay am I reading?"
I'm... really, really not sure how I'm supposed to react to all this. This story pretty much made my emotional spectrum more varied then Rainbow Dash's colors. In the end though, I'll admit that it was an awesome (if horrifying) read.
In conclusion, I think this story is definitive proof of something I've suspected since I learned about FiM; Celestia browses 4chan. That's the only explanation for her knowing about the phrase "wincest".
Wincest = It's basically an act of hot sex between family members, which makes it WINcest.
O.o
i was hoping there would be a UFO ending like in silent hill...shucks
So... she inflicted serious sexual and emotional trauma upon the Elements of Harmony, along with more than a few others... for a PRANK?
Thank God this wasn't the actual ending, else I may have had to choke a bitch.
I'm horrified, and yet at the same time inexplicably drawn to this story. I just... I... fuck.
-Rape everypony (including forced incest between AJ and Big Mac)
-Tell them its a prank and expect them to forgive you
Seriously, Tia, what kind of drugs are you on?
I was honestly expecting the first one. Second one bothers me. Molesting ponies as an April Foals' joke? That's a bit on the extreme side, isn't it?
Best alternate ending ever
The second one was absolutely hilarious. Also I like how Twilight gets utterly broken in one and is implied to get raped multiple times (and thus probably broken) in the other. Finally seeing one psychologically broken after the main story has them basically act as if they weren't raped at all (except for wanting to stop Molestia) is nice.
No alt where the CMC and Trixie (preferably with Luna and Twilight getting a second helping in a rape foursome the epicness of which makes for an amazing climax to the story before the elements come in) are raped? I am disappointed, but those would take a while to write or else be too short...are these two the only alternates we will see?
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As I stated in earlier comments, I will not include CMC rape.
Too young is too young.
yes Luna, what ever you say.
April fools, and thanks for letting me get my freak on.
Ok, now how about a Celestia/trixie alt?
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
DARN YOU!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ah, I didn't see that statement on here (and I just rechekked.) You must mean ponibooru comments.
TROLLESTIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!
I wouldn't mind being Twi in alternate ending #1...
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NO!!!!!! DON'T!!!!
Oh god, my sides, this is the most hilarious story ever!
Can you make the alternate endings longer?
Please?
Pretty please?
Pretty please with Molestia on top?
At first I was like
And then I was like
Just needs a spelling/grammar cleanup and it's golden. The premise is ridiculously hilarious and kept me coming back for more, but the various problems with capitalization, spelling, and the like hurt it. A solid 4 from me!
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I have just finished going through and making a whole bunch of grammar/spelling corrections, as well as adding italics in multiple places where they weren't before. Should be better now.
Incredibly well-written, but my mind has been raped by this story.... ESPECIALLY in chapter 5. Applejack is my favorite, THAT'S NOT EVEN COOL!!
2409LSD OF CORSE!
What is this? I dont even...
YOU MUST continue the alternative endings, It was too funny, i have to know the aftermath
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+10 Respect
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Aww... Should'a known, someone like you who writes sex vaguely enough that I was first wondering why Molestia was only licking their coats...
i think molesting nine ponies is a bit far to go for an april foals prank.
I laughed SO HARD! At the second alternate ending. "Aw horseapples..." *rolls on the floor laughing*
Swear to god, us have to be as screwed up as someone who wants to be a math teacher to make a prank like that.
ill use twilights last words of wisdom to help me get through what is happening in
my head
happy place...happy place...happy place...
What? Molestia is evolving!
Congratulations! Your Molestia evolved into Trollestia!
Gahahahahaha...ha..ha..*cries inside* That was voluntary?!?!?!
alternate edning #2 deserves a medal
alt 1: wow.........just...wow
alt 2: are you bucking kidding me
I see what I did there
Twiluna alt you say? I think i will just keep this as the real ending. But not molest-luna, just normal luna.
that was the FUNNIEST. ENDING. EVER!
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
moleastia+trolleastia=
we r fucked
Alright I don't remember the president streaking across the golden gate bridge because it was April fools. Sorry but alternate ending 2 got lost somewhere between pinkies thighs and big Macs dick
Alternate ending #2 was awesome and, well to be honest confusing. WHY would anypony go around molesting everyone she knows and then announce it's was just APRIL FOALS!
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oh........... my god........(ess?)
alt 2.... such trolling... it shouldn't be conceivably possible! *curls into fetal position and rocks back and forth* Find a happy place... find a happy place... find a happy place... *continues indefinitely*
Confusion about alt 2...the guards said they'd known about molestia for centuries, but seemed too shocked to be in on the prank. So how did molestia not exist. She couldnt of been planning for centuries.
2763 Your story is incredibly well written. It is one of the best fanfics I have ever read.
May the force be with you.
-Bronysith