Hmmmmm Looks like Celestias hade a "piece of pie" "Has Tasted the Rainbow" and about to have "bite the Apple" "Love the Dress" and "lick the Magic clean off"
But needs more Graphic stuff if i made one i would add in Extremly bad rape Extremly good sex and Screaming
And Poor big Mac he didnt get "the Royal Treatment" lol
Please, for the love if all things Equestria, DON'T touch the CMC. They are the only hope of innocence I have left in this strangely en-grossing (huh huh he said gross) tale. I mean it!
i know this is a fanfic and i shouldn't be picky, but this is really awful prose. it shows promise, for the most part follows pretty well, but somebody needs to open a thesaurus. that's my two cents. For what's it's worth, it's kinda amazing that this isn't so graphic as it is disturbing, which is rather impressive considering the subject matter. 8/10 would bang
I guess celestia "tasted the rainbow".
Heh, get it?
733
Hah! Funny!
Yes,that was funny!
Is it just me,or do these icons fit the story?
I wish i was celestia
733 Actually, I think the Rainbow tasted Celestia. Specifically her horn.
I love Rainbow Dash but this is ridiculous...
wow
NO! YOU LEAVE MY DASHIE ALONE!
why can't i stop reading!!
Oh you little ponies will get your do soon enough...~
the "Gotchya" made me LOL.
You know to be honest i didnt think this story would interest me but damn it im F$%@*& hooked
No! Bad boner! stop that right now!
733 EYUP, but what could be next? surley they wouldnt have kids raped , cause they are to nice to do that
I have the weirdest boner right now.
Damn lucky Big Mac
12972 they conspire agnized us
yup, still pretty messed up, but I love it!
Wow. This is to say, interesting. BUT YOU BETTER LEAVE FLUTTERSHY ALONE.
Eeowwkay... I already saw Cupcakes... But this is turning to be 10 times more f%^$'d up!
Awesome stuff. As odd as it is... I love it!
Lol. Apple Jack has a scary story, eh? Well, HERE'S a whopper for yeh...
What have you've done?
But still... :megusta: :|
IT STILL NEEDS MORE GRAPHIC STUFF!!!!!!!!!
Hmmmmm
Looks like Celestias hade a "piece of pie" "Has Tasted the Rainbow" and about to have "bite the Apple" "Love the Dress" and "lick the Magic clean off"
But needs more Graphic stuff if i made one i would add in Extremly bad rape Extremly good sex and Screaming
And Poor big Mac he didnt get "the Royal Treatment" lol
WHAT THE FUCK!!!
THIS IS EVEN WORSE YUCK
EWW EWW EWW EWW THIS IS FUCKING DISGUSTING
FIRST I WAS LIKE THIS THEN THEN THEN THEN THEN THEN THEN
Please, for the love if all things Equestria, DON'T touch the CMC. They are the only hope of innocence I have left in this strangely en-grossing (huh huh he said gross) tale. I mean it!
rape.
What the hell... I don't even know......
please leve my dear rarity alone
please leave my dear rarity alone
Aww yeah. I enjoyed this.
<( IF YOU TOUCH RARITY ............I SWEAR........................I KNOW KARATE!
<(Problem Spike?
lol i still dont know why i'm reading!
I read gotchya and I thought tea troll->
Thank God that there hasn't been a "surprise buttsex" scene yet lol.
plz rape aj plz rape aj plz rape aj plz rape aj
Hmm...If I was a stallion, I would possibly...enjoy that.
Oh yea, I would SO enjoy that
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59213 NO. MORE. SEX PUNS.
Replace Molestia with me and we got friday night's plans
Oh, all you silly fillies! *cue Pinkamena voice* YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT MESSED UP IS TILL SWEET APPLE MASSACARE!
442748sweet apple massacre was so much worse!!!
this iconhas a new meaning:
319954
MY THOUGHTS EXACTLY
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^ was my reaction
733 Dude, this guy's crazy. And I have know Idea why I'm talking to an outdated comment!
swag Swag Swag! SWAG!
('');
And here i was waiting for the molestia-mac thing. DoesAnd here i was waiting for a molestia-mac thing. Does she just prefer girls or what?
90082 Whos a smart kid?
Is her hair grey? I mean, she IS molestia. I wonder if she gets AJ. Well, i guess i'll just have to keep reading!
i know this is a fanfic and i shouldn't be picky, but this is really awful prose. it shows promise, for the most part follows pretty well, but somebody needs to open a thesaurus. that's my two cents. For what's it's worth, it's kinda amazing that this isn't so graphic as it is disturbing, which is rather impressive considering the subject matter.
8/10 would bang
Nice work saying its face as apposed to her face
It builds suspension