As much as I've been clamoring for this descent into perversion to be over, we kinda need an epilogue. Some serious shit went down in this fic, man! Half these ponies are gonna need therapy.
I'm actually asking for more. Oh shiiiiiii I've been tainted! No!
This ended very abruptly, I agree with Papillon Rose, an epilogue would be welcome. I mean, they were all molested but AJ and Big Mac need more than an apology.
Still, looking forward to the alt endings. This was a better fic than I thought it was going to be.
i hate myself for liking this, but it hit on my secret fetishes just right...... god i'm a horrible person.
really good fic though. i thoroughly enjoyed every creepy kinky moment of it. best moment was "i know, how a bout some Wincest!" i laughed my head off. good show.
This kind of happy ending was a bit disappointing. Elements of Harmony kinda took care of the "years of trauma therapy" part, but there still should be some fallout. Awkwardness between AJ and Big Mac, AJ getting pregnant, and Twilight starting to lust after Celestia would be fitting.
The best fan fic I've ever read. Seriously, through all the terror and perversion that has occurred during the story, I couldnt applaud more than I already am. BRING ON THE ALTERNATE ENDINGS!
So she raped Twilight and then made her write a report about it?
Yeah, the ending was definitely the weak point of an otherwise solid story. Cheesy, everything was magically better, endings don't really go with stories like this one.
OMG that ending was so cheesy it was worthy of a canon episode.
Oh, ya didn't think people still read this thing did ya?
anyway, very nice old story I'm glad to have stumbled across in the archival mass of a little over 1000 (clop) fics on this site. I find it slightly odd yet not bad that you went though all this without actually mentioning any penetration aside from a vague reference during the applecest scene. I'm going to read the spoofs and alts. I bet now twilight has some confusing feelings about her mentor which could potentially justify about 50% of the next couple hundred twilestia ship fics out there. Over all not bad though not perfect but then I don't believe this is exactly your latest work now is it?
That was epic. I can't wait for the alternate endings and spoof scenes. I bet they'll be a doozy!
I read this... i liked it.... oh god i must be a terrible person...
I liked it. Princess Molestia tackled in a non-comedy fashion is novel and freakishly enjoyable!
i enjoyed this and now i shall jump off this cliff i am standing infront of
weeeeeeee!!!!!!! *splat*
As much as I've been clamoring for this descent into perversion to be over, we kinda need an epilogue. Some serious shit went down in this fic, man! Half these ponies are gonna need therapy.
I'm actually asking for more. Oh shiiiiiii I've been tainted! No!
I just gotta ask, are one of the alternate endings going to be Fluttershy scaring Molestia into repression? Thus allowing Celestia to regain control?
or...
Is Molestia going to do it with everyone in Ponyville... AW NAO!!! NOT SPIKE AGAIN! You've already done so much with Spike the first time you HAG!!
Oh what's the use of getting riled up over the inevitable... I know you're going to do it...
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well, there you have an alternate ending...
a really disturbing one
I think this is prime material for a two-parter episode. Yep.
I will love you forever if you make a sequel where AJ finds out she got knocked up by Big Mac.
This ended very abruptly, I agree with Papillon Rose, an epilogue would be welcome. I mean, they were all molested but AJ and Big Mac need more than an apology.
Still, looking forward to the alt endings. This was a better fic than I thought it was going to be.
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Thats a weird alternate ending....
Story- great,
ending- ok,
years of therapy - pricessless.
Can't wait for alt endings (hope one will be an epic trixie fail, and one will be twilight be traumatized and turn into twilight molestia )
I like how everything Molestia said has perversion and dark humor.
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Which one? Flutter-rage induced repression? or the Ponyville sized orgy?
Awesome story. Expected ending was expected, but that's what alternates are for, eh?
Also, +1 internets for the Dark Tower reference, even if it is just in the Author Notes.
i hate myself for liking this, but it hit on my secret fetishes just right...... god i'm a horrible person.
really good fic though. i thoroughly enjoyed every creepy kinky moment of it. best moment was "i know, how a bout some Wincest!" i laughed my head off. good show.
i still feel terrible for liking this
I totally thought it was gonna be a huge orgy.... a little bit of friendship and magic.
Every time I read an Elements of Harmony scene, I always think
"TASTE THE RAINBOW, MOTHERFUCKER!"
This was completely horrifying and it has scarred me for life... Good job!
i just wrote a long-ass comment then realized everypony would be bored reading it.
This kind of happy ending was a bit disappointing. Elements of Harmony kinda took care of the "years of trauma therapy" part, but there still should be some fallout. Awkwardness between AJ and Big Mac, AJ getting pregnant, and Twilight starting to lust after Celestia would be fitting.
what teh fawk
I still feal like trixe shoud have been killed or something...
My friends are right I have a horrible sense of humor.
DIE MOLESTIA!!!
yeah
15607>>15607
The best fan fic I've ever read. Seriously, through all the terror and perversion that has occurred during the story, I couldnt applaud more than I already am. BRING ON THE ALTERNATE ENDINGS!
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[Twilight starting to lust after Celestia would be fitting]
I secretly hoped for that...
A-a.... Friendship report.... She asks for a friendship report. After she just RAPED them?
WUT.
Twilight's face did this number while they were doing it.
is it.............no..............i just...................nevermind
2303 we are all terrible people in our own way.
No problems with your ending or reports bro
well only think i can say is
it was good... tough i was having a weird feeling while reading the story
well i guess all that hasnt been done is the one song everyone is thinking about right now "I just had sex".
Well
I JUST HAD SEEEEEEEEEEEEX AND IT FELT SO GOOOOOOOOOOD
Well you are correct that finales do not seem to be your strong point but none the less I did like the story, NAOW ONTO ALTERNATE ENDINGS!!
this is my face during the story
So she raped Twilight and then made her write a report about it?
Yeah, the ending was definitely the weak point of an otherwise solid story. Cheesy, everything was magically better, endings don't really go with stories like this one.
OMG that ending was so cheesy it was worthy of a canon episode.
Oh, ya didn't think people still read this thing did ya?
anyway, very nice old story I'm glad to have stumbled across in the archival mass of a little over 1000 (clop) fics on this site. I find it slightly odd yet not bad that you went though all this without actually mentioning any penetration aside from a vague reference during the applecest scene. I'm going to read the spoofs and alts. I bet now twilight has some confusing feelings about her mentor which could potentially justify about 50% of the next couple hundred twilestia ship fics out there. Over all not bad though not perfect but then I don't believe this is exactly your latest work now is it?
139388 I heard pony hell has some nice hot springs
swag Swag Swag! SWAG!
needs more of this
poor Celestia.. group hug
Never thought I'd be reading a story of how Princess Celestia was really a serial rapist at heart. Good on you for making it creative tho.
Well I watch Molestia on youtube and liked it so, why not read the story.
Great Job as always!
BEST STORY EVER
This was me that entire time