Gotta say, awesome chapter, woulda been nice to see more from the side of Celestia/Twilight during it, rather than breaking off to Trixie/Luna/Silver Shield during their performance. But other than that there is really incredibly little I can fault this on. (Also update on my birthday! I feel awesome, but also feel even more creepy for wanting to see this end... :P)
Don't worry yall, the cliffhanger is more of a "before the last chapter" thing. Ya know, build suspense and whatnot. next chapter IS the last chapter, and its finale will be amazing! Some of you will be in shock! Others in awe! A few may even have boners! It all awaits... next month. . . . Just kidding, probably in around a few days.
Excellently perverse as always. My one complaint would be that you switched weirdly into present tense (almost wrote pleasant tense there) for some of the Twilight erotic description, which broke the flow of the story some what.
Actually, my other complaint is on the cliffhanger. That makes me sad. Still awesome though. And i loved the Trixie masturbation thing XD Luna looking over shocked shes actually seeing what shes seeing.
Should i be enjoyig this as much as i do. Nope But i'll be damned. i AM enjoying this. Love the fact no strong words are used and my perverted twisted lil mind makes out the rest. Also the trixie bit made me drop the laptop in a laughing fit. Cant wait for the next chapter
I can't believe StreakTheFox is reading these comments... If your reading this than you should know that I feel "dirty"! My favorite characters are getting molested by they're deity!
2165 I love reading every comment I get Seriously. The fact that people are actually READING and acknowledging my work is just... mind blowing to me. I love you all ... as for the dirtiness... BUENO
I noticed a typo in the text. During twilights scene it says that the fatigue is NOT taking effect when they mean it is NOW taking affect. Grammar error in a clopfic who would notice.
Let it be known, everyone of these ponies will require AT MINIMUM 2 years of therapy to be returned to normal after all of this is over. Also, WTF Trixie?!? Would have been my reaction if I were Luna. Finally, why in GOD'S Green Earth can't I stop reading this? Fur Christs Sake I made an OC to be specially inserted into this story.
all of you aren't NEARLY as f%#$ed up as I am. I too have read cupcakes & I have to say the recent animation was worse than the ACTUAL fanfic. at least one of us here remains level-headed
Oh what the f...!? I mean really? That Part with trixie actually.... I had somewhat of a lol and WTF face Out of all the things, trixie had go *clop clop*
This aroused me. Derp.
Gotta say, awesome chapter, woulda been nice to see more from the side of Celestia/Twilight during it, rather than breaking off to Trixie/Luna/Silver Shield during their performance. But other than that there is really incredibly little I can fault this on. (Also update on my birthday! I feel awesome, but also feel even more creepy for wanting to see this end... :P)
So cliffhangers we meet again Soon you will be gone and we will know what happend next....just you wait
at the Trixie part.
Stop making all these cliffhangers!I can't take cliffhangers anymore!
Great story. I do wish that this place allowed for a bit more detail in such stories though :)
HAAAAAAAA! Cliffangher! Why you tease! I can't get this anymore!!
This by far one of the sickest fanfic I ever read, and I've read cupcakes, so why is it that I can't stop reading it!
Tee Hee
Molestia: Do you like my cliffhanger
Awesome, I can't wait for the ALT endings!
Don't worry yall, the cliffhanger is more of a "before the last chapter" thing. Ya know, build suspense and whatnot. next chapter IS the last chapter, and its finale will be amazing!
Some of you will be in shock!
Others in awe!
A few may even have boners!
It all awaits... next month.
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Just kidding, probably in around a few days.
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Don't you mean " WINGBONER"
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*head slams into the wall*
Good Lordy
Its so wrong...but I can't look away....
Excellently perverse as always. My one complaint would be that you switched weirdly into present tense (almost wrote pleasant tense there) for some of the Twilight erotic description, which broke the flow of the story some what.
Actually, my other complaint is on the cliffhanger. That makes me sad. Still awesome though. And i loved the Trixie masturbation thing XD Luna looking over shocked shes actually seeing what shes seeing.
I have a new great fear in my life, replacing serial murderers, It, and the Ring:
Princess Molestia.
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It's funny because "Plot" has another meaning.
Should i be enjoyig this as much as i do. Nope
But i'll be damned. i AM enjoying this. Love the fact no strong words are used and my perverted twisted lil mind makes out the rest. Also the trixie bit made me drop the laptop in a laughing fit. Cant wait for the next chapter
Finish it, man. Finish it so I can put it behind me and move on with my life. >_<
...I thought it was supposed to be "worse" than Cupcakes (Which, sucked hard, btw.) But, alas, i LOVE it!!
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...Is that bad news? Oh well..
I can't believe StreakTheFox is reading these comments...
If your reading this than you should know that I feel "dirty"!
My favorite characters are getting molested by they're deity!
And... and HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!
I HAVE TO READ MORE!
thatismyfetishtrixie.jpg
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I love reading every comment I get
Seriously. The fact that people are actually READING and acknowledging my work is just... mind blowing to me.
I love you all
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as for the dirtiness...
BUENO
LOL aqua team reference.
hey streak. sup. SUP. i'll read this if you write some kind of stupid gender swap thing. really. that is my fetish. (but ponibooru knows that already)
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That...
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that's actually a good idea.
:D
MALESTIA TIME!
Was twilight enjoying this?
Ha! Celestia is Handbanana! XD Loved that reference. :P Alright, on to the next chapter!
"Ya see? I'm just a Princess. All I know is 'Friendship' and 'Magic'
... And RAPE."
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I noticed a typo in the text. During twilights scene it says that the fatigue is NOT taking effect when they mean it is NOW taking affect. Grammar error in a clopfic who would notice.
I wanna be raped
Their horns are touching!
"Eeyup"
I just...I just couldn't help but laugh at that part
this is the most serious thing ever...that i've read in the story of princess molestia O_O
i wanna be raped ny celestia!.....
dam im such a creep...but i still wanna be raped by her
2182 im not sure how i feel about this. but hey! art is art.... no matter the genre.
O GOD WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!!!!
20142 You and me both, friend.
So basically... horns are like penises?
The hand banana reference is cruel, sir.
First I was like:
Then I was like:
Then I instantly remembered what was going on, and now I'm all: applecry:
uuuum i am re reading and i'm starting to wonder why... eh heh heh
Let it be known, everyone of these ponies will require AT MINIMUM 2 years of therapy to be returned to normal after all of this is over.
Also, WTF Trixie?!? Would have been my reaction if I were Luna.
Finally, why in GOD'S Green Earth can't I stop reading this? Fur Christs Sake I made an OC to be specially inserted into this story.
Again , thorough brain washing................as soon as i read the next few chaptes....
all of you aren't NEARLY as f%#$ed up as I am. I too have read cupcakes & I have to say the recent animation was worse than the ACTUAL fanfic. at least one of us here remains level-headed
Lol trixie clopping
Damn Trixie...
But then again...I would enjoy the free porno being played out for me too.....
@Pheonixfire92: daaaaaaamn straight aaaaaadn now i have a massive boner....... well guess ill have to take care of that..... TO THE BATHROOM!!!!!
Lawl cliffhangers... good thing I read the story way late so I don't have to wait for an update!
Am I mistaken? Or did Celestia quote from Hand Banana?
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I'm pretty messed up too. You can spend a few hours with me, it'll show.
Honestly, I want to type what I do/think here, but there are so many things messed up.
I can't choose what I want to put.
Oh what the f...!? I mean really? That Part with trixie actually....
I had somewhat of a lol and WTF face
Out of all the things, trixie had go *clop clop*
I didn't even get a hardon.