This is so effing wrong, man. It's a total clopfic, however, it's fairly amusing in some places. I have to say, chapter 5 squicked me right the eff out, and I'm still pretty uncomfortable thinking about that one. I want to see how this all works out, so against my better judgment I'll keep reading...also, I don't think this can get any worse than chapter 5. I think we hit rock bottom in the perversion pit with that one. ::shivers::
My god, this is worse than a train wreck and a Greek tradgity combined. It's like I want to look away but I can't, well at least this can't get as creepy as "cupcakes" but I might end up wrong.
M only complaint is the overuse of the words 'lightly' and 'slightly', as in some places, they could be replaced with other words that better fit the context.
Excuse me while I clean the charred remains of my brain off the computer screen. You' be amazed how difficult it is to do that after your head exploded.
The rage I feel right now towards Molestia, it's, it's, IT'S OVER 9000!!!! Joking aside, the wincest scene has got to be the worst, Right? Right?! RIGHT?!?!? Unless of course, you would dare touch the CMC. OH GOD, my brain just short circuited. I need to go rest and prepare myself for the next chapter.
That about sums up my reaction. I'm still trying to decide what rating to give...
YES!!!
I loved this when I first saw it from Ponibooru comments! Now that it's here, I am ecstatic! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Omg, why am I reading this! And I felt like puking through Princess Celestia and Big Mac and Applejack episode.
I love this. Why do I love this. I shouldn't love this story, but I do.
double rape!
Yes!
...Man...im such a creep.... BUT IM PROUD!
This is so effing wrong, man. It's a total clopfic, however, it's fairly amusing in some places. I have to say, chapter 5 squicked me right the eff out, and I'm still pretty uncomfortable thinking about that one. I want to see how this all works out, so against my better judgment I'll keep reading...also, I don't think this can get any worse than chapter 5. I think we hit rock bottom in the perversion pit with that one. ::shivers::
712 Yeah...I feel unclean after that. I feel LIKE I WILL BE SOILED FOREVER
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
My god, this is worse than a train wreck and a Greek tradgity combined. It's like I want to look away but I can't, well at least this can't get as creepy as "cupcakes" but I might end up wrong.
979
Would you prefer it if I used explicit words? ;D
Oh dear lord, why I cannot stop reading this shit?
It seems like every rape is more intense than the last...I hope Twilight is last.
1003
I'm actually very impressed with your abstinence of explicit wording, and yet able to still bring out the intensity of the erotica you're writing.
The subject matter is so wrong, but I can't stop reading. Keep going!
THIS. STORY. IS. AWESOOOOOOOOME!
So very wrong.
Please do continue.
The lack of explicit words, while maintaining the intensity of the scene is commendable.
:*bangs head against wall*
STOP READING THIS:flutterrage
But I can't.
1003Yes
im scared why am i still reading this?
I feel terribly perverted as I cannot stop reading.
+= EWW YOU PREVERT!!
There are no words......
I cant stop...
.....WHY!!!!
I feel so dirty now....
This is so very very wrong...
Oh God, now I can't even look at the ponies the same way
.... o.o
this is so sick.
but it gave me a hella boner either way.
Oh...My...Goodness....Im....Going to...Cower in a corner now.....crying....
I actually laughed pretty hard when she said 'wincest'. good thing my sister stopped bugging me when i said "nevermind".
CAN'T STOP READING
OH!! Now I get it. This whole story is a metaphor of how streakthefox is mind raping everyone!!
Damn You!!
My reaction.-
1003 maybe have someone else write it with explicit words, just for shits and gigles
I showed it to my brither and he told me it turned him on.
Ponycest? Molestia you monster!!
Molestia you inconsolable little bastard
i may be sick
M only complaint is the overuse of the words 'lightly' and 'slightly', as in some places, they could be replaced with other words that better fit the context.
OH GOD THE HORROR!
Excuse me while I clean the charred remains of my brain off the computer screen. You' be amazed how difficult it is to do that after your head exploded.
YES YES YES FINALLY MORE GRAPHIC SEX!!!!!!!!!!!!
YEAH
OMG!!!! im disgusting oh well!
EWWWWWWWWWWWW
THIS IS EVEN WORSE I FELT LIKE SCREAMING AT THE APPLEJACK AND BIG MACINTOSH PART
SISTER FUCKING? ARE YOU SERIOUS!!!!!!!! THATS LIKE THE MOST FUCKING DISGUSTING SHIT IN THE FUCKING WORLD!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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The rage I feel right now towards Molestia, it's, it's, IT'S OVER 9000!!!!
Joking aside, the wincest scene has got to be the worst, Right? Right?! RIGHT?!?!? Unless of course, you would dare touch the CMC. OH GOD, my brain just short circuited. I need to go rest and prepare myself for the next chapter.
Did Big Mac just fuck his own sister, and cummed inside of her?
Jeez.
Why can't I stop reading this?! I hate wincest, but I liked this! What the fuck is wrong with me?!
Imagine when they wake up...
Incest. Rape. What is next? Pedophilia?
Celestia ontop of the cutie mark crusaders
60830 ummm.... i dislike your name... *shudders*... also has anypony else noticed that this emoticon has been a tad over used
Every time i try to shake the images out of my head, my friend says i sound like Ellis from L4D2 when he gets the heroi.... i mean adrenaline.