I am a relatively new brony who wishes to write and read some of the fanfic. I prefer heavy and intricate plots. I despise forcing ships on others. My favorite villain (and hero) is Starlight Glimmer.
The first day Canterlot Boutique was dominated by the Princess Dress. Every mare in the city wanted one, and as soon as the magazines went out, more would. Sassy had to, for most of the day, take measurements and orders to make sure each mare would get a dress they loved. Before she is able to close the store, however, an orange pegasus comes in to place in a very special request for the Princess Dress.
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This was a lot more serious than I was expecting, but I liked it!
I think you had a bit at the end that was supposed to be in an author's note, though... it doesn't make sense just jammed on the end like that.
Also, my only criticism of the content overall is that Flash came around pretty quickly to what Sassy was saying. Seems like that might take more persuasion IRL. But I get that it's a short story.
Given Twilight's penchant for checklists and over-planning things, now I'm curious what would happen if someone actually tried to woo her like this.
Is that an editor note at the end, that got left in by mistake?
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Yes, there was a comment from Google Docs that snuck its way onto the story. I am mentally kicking myself for not seeing it.
it was a good read. Looking forward to see more of you
actually.... damn thats really good advice!
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Very well written. Good story. As so many others have said, it's good advice to anyone