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TimesX


I tend to be more romantic than I am poetic.

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Twilight has had feelings for Rainbow Dash for as long as she can remember, and she believes that the best time to tell Rainbow about her feelings is during Heart's and Hooves day.

The only problem is, how will she do it? Can she even do it? and after all that, what if Rainbow said no? or yes?

Pinkie notices Twilight's problem and asks help from someone who can help twilight confess- Just not by conventional means.
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One-shot fluffy Twidash fic.
Marked "complete" because originally it is a oneshot, but depending on the ratings, I might add a few more chapters.
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before you start reading this, I suggest you turn on the "color inversion". If you have an idea of what it is, that's good. But otherwise, you access it by.

Searching "Magnifier" -> after opening it, set zoom to 100% (if it already isn't) then click the gear thingy(settings) ->click "Turn on color inversion"
and voila, you have inverted colors. If you want to close it, just close the magnifier.
Keep in mind that this does not affect your computer in anyway other than seeing all the colors inverted-in short-It's totally safe

Visual steps here

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 34 )

Hey, just wanted to mention you added this to the shipping group as a raridash. Me, I'll ship just about anything, but you might mildly annoy some other folks.

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EDIT: Just realized I wasn't the one who added it there. I can't find the trash button beside the thing. But it's removed there now so I guess the issue's resolved.

...what is it like in Color inversion mode...my magnifier doesn't seem to be working all that proper.... >_<

6955795 Oh lol, in color inversion mode, it just switches the background from white to black and the letters from black to white.

It basically looks like this.

It isn't required really, I just thought that it would make the atmosphere more... romantic because the setting of the story primarily focuses on night time.

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Aww, I thought there was something hidden in there. :pinkiesad2:
I agree that the mood is better with black background on white text, though. :pinkiehappy:

You know there's a built-in feature in this site for dark backgrounds, right?

6956514 Yes, I do. But for me personally, it just has to be the magnifier.

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Ah, yes, it had been added by a mysterious individual by the name of 'XsemiT'. Don't know how I could have confused them with you.

The story was cute, but damn, did that wall kill your parents or something?

"Pay up" Pinkie demanded as she grabbed a piece of chocolate from the She was stationed at the very top of Canterlot palace, to keep her from falling, a transparent magical barrier which suddenly appeared out of nowhere was created and placed on the tip.

Something's not quite right with this sentence.

6956997 Oh, that probably slipped my proofread.

Sorry, didn't really like this. Too much irrelevant stuff, and the narrator is figuratively speaking constantly kicking the reader in the teeth and yelling "You are reading made-up story about made-up ponies, don't you dare to get immersed!"

The only reason I even finished this was to see if it was supposed to be some kind of commentary on all the stories where the author twists everything to a pretzel to get the pairing.. well, paired. But the story seems to take itself too seriously for that.

TimesX this chapter was awesome and I can't wait to read the other chapter and This is actually going very good, and I will say this chapter deserves 9/10.

That was one of the best stories I have read and I hope to read more of your stories :twilightsmile: I give this story 10/10

:rainbowlaugh: That's Pinkie for you!

Best pinkie pie wall breaks in history!

I don't particularly like the ending, but it was otherwise an amazing fic! Nice one.

Comment posted by Lavender_Raindrops deleted May 3rd, 2016

The story was...well, I didn't like it. At first there's the classic pinkie and the narrator 4th wall break.
And I really don't see the point of the curse in this story. It would have worked out without it if you'd ask me.

Apart from that, it was alright.

7223093 To each their own :twilightsmile:

7223405 Yeah, everything's fine as long as I'm not writing:twilightblush:

7276979 None taken, if you want Appledash, I think I have some in my arsenal somewhere.

One of my new favs. Nice job

One of the greatest I read so far hope you make more chapters and I hope that you do involve narratorpie as the narrator with pinkie interupting occasionally just because that seems like what she would do.

Damn Pinki, you always have to brake the 4th wall! Even in a Twidash, which I thought that was hella clever! Keep up the good work bro /)

That was sooo random! Soooooooooo Pinkie :pinkiegasp:

You did really great! Maybe more TwiDash?:twilightsmile:

Okay, THAT was genius! :rainbowlaugh:
No one can resist the Wacom Cintique 24HD Pen Display :rainbowlaugh:

"I mean- you're a princess, a symbol of... well... what's that word again? Polly-teeks?"
"Poilitics" Twilight corrected

And it's STILL wrong! XD

"Achoo!" Princess Celestial wiped her muzzle with a tissue.

... Eeyeah. That should tell you what I mean...

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Not gonna lie, that part made me laugh out loud

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