In the process of living a full life, the joy of having friends doesn't come from their large numbers. Instead, it is found in the depth of the emotional bond between two individuals. A bond that persists through trials and hardships that serves only to nurture and grow the person that is the other. It is a bond that can only be established between true friends.
Yet, it is also a bond Wallflower Blush believes she will never experience
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Vel had always been interested in Wallflower Blush. She, among other people, stood out the most in his eyes. And it wasn't just her straightforward attitude nor her simple yet charming appearance which motivated him to approach her but something else entirely. Somewhere deep inside he felt a connection with her, a connection which he couldn't explain no matter how much time he spent thinking over it. Even before he had introduced himself he felt like he knew her.
And it felt like she knew him
The description sounds interessting, still I hope this isn't one of those stories where only the main char has a reason to blush 100% of the time and where only he is nervous or.....not sure if I would want him to start out with "love at first sight", or if I would want it to develop in the story.
Well I guess I see for myself where this is heading.
A lot of capitalization for sentences is needed. That was the only 'big' error I found.
Nice!
Question. If this is E rated, then why the swearing in this part?
Still, this is quite good. I will read more of this fic.
If you put swearing, then it's appropriate that you change the rating.
Was a little apprehensive reading at first but know I’ve read it;
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Sorry about that. I changed it
This is suggesting that he is either sweet or going to be pretty embarassing.
I like that at least they seems to be equally akward.
Like I said that happened a bit quickly but that they are both akward enough makes it nice again.
I agree, she would probably be one of those who would simply force them to be together not noticing their feelings or how she maybe does more than they can handle, at least the way she is often written.
aawwwww the way it was written I expected twenty or more chapters.
Well I liked this chapter, it is rare enough with how the main chars behave and everything that I want it to be longer. I mean you could get the impression that interessting stories like this are either short or suddenly die along the way and stuff that seems like everything else, stays.
Okay I'm not happy with that sentence, but as long as I got my point across...
Yep this is interessting enough and I would be happy if it doesn't stop to soon, it doesn't even need some sort of epic plot.
Usually, I tend to have that skepticism when it comes to canon x oc shipping but this is one of those times that I swept it aside. The interactions between WB and the protagonist did feel a bit rushed, but their awkwardness helped with that and even made it quite adorable. I could also feel that their happiness at finding a friend was genuine so I'm intrigued to see where this goes.
Do you mind if I make fan art of this? If it's alright with you, I'm gonna need a description of what Vel looks like.
this is too rare to be a 3 chapter story. I literally searched the entire website and this was the only story except for nordryd's oneshot to match the OC x wallflower blush. so yeah, just saying maybe you should consider making this a little longer?