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Public speaking is hard. Having Lemon Zest, Sour Sweet, Sunny Flare, and Indigo Zap as your friends is even harder. How Sugarcoat manages to stay awake is something even she doesn't know.


Inspired by the cover art by Hannaspeert123. :pinkiesmile:

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Sugarcoat should consider not answering doors sometimes. And buying some earmuffs.

"No thank you. I had a dream I fell through a portal and went back in time. It was not very pleasant," Sugarcoat answered, flattening her ears.

"I did enjoy the parts with my Wondercolt nemesis's brother, however" :trollestia:

Was that a reference to Sugarcoat Interferes With Pony History I saw?

"No thank you. I had a dream I fell through a portal and went back in time.It was not very pleasant," Sugarcoat answered, flattening her ears.

I think you're forgetting a word there. Other than that, nice reference. Made me chuckle a bit.

6706532 :rainbowlaugh: At least until some grey mare showed up and tried to steal him from me!" :twilightangry2:

6709073 I really hope one chapter has her fight against Marble Pie :rainbowlaugh:

6709081 Yes! :rainbowkiss: The only reason she goes is to keep an eye on Big Mac! :raritywink:

Note to self: Do NOT get Sugarcoat hyped up on sugar...

6714005 I so can't wait for that chapter! :rainbowkiss:

Poor Sugarcoat :twilightsheepish: At least she got some sleep in the end!

You captured the characters really well in this. Nice read, nice work :twilightsmile:

6716102 It is XD

"Sugarcoat's had too much sugar!" Sunny pointed out nervously.

I'm not the only one being ironic today...

"No thank you. I had a dream I fell through a portal and went back in time. It was not very pleasant," Sugarcoat answered, flattening her ears.

The thing you did there. I see it. :pinkiecrazy:

Sugarcoat's eyes gleamed. "Let's play Pin the Tail on the Annoying Bipolar Mare!"

:rainbowlaugh: I just LOST IT at this.

The ending was a bit abrupt, though. Really, there should be a bit more wind-down, and it should end with Sugarcoat facing her friends and everypony realizing they weren't really being very considerate of her. You know, friendship lesson and all that good stuff.

6792853 Thanks for the advice! :pinkiesmile: If I ever remember, I'll be sure to edit it!

6713281 I totally agree with you there PinkyPie25800

First off I liked this.

But Fall out boy is not metal, neither is Panic at the Disco. Though I can forgive this as it was Sugarcoat you had say Metal.

Also Powerade and Gatorade. Which I believe is what You're spoofing with "Ponyade". Are not energy drinks and are power waters. Also my real point is they have dramatically less sugar than energy drinks.

Never enough stories of the ponified crew here. Love it!

"I'm not bipolar!" Sour Sweet screamed.

"I'm schizophrenic!"

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