On the other side of the ocean, lies a long forgotten land. Quietly, they watched the other lands, biding their time. When the time is right, they will reveal themselves. On one hand is an olive branch. On the other, is a sword.
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looks like war is coming sooner than what anyone thought it was.
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GO GO GO move it people. Were going to have a very long day.
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Don't take so long with the next part plz.
I am really enjoying this.
If they have that advanced aircraft carriers the they have no need for battleships.
well ... looks like its time to rush an offensive before enemy mobilizes
also have to wonder if griffins need to go as well
7061410 I'll show later why they still use battleships. Btw, aircraft carriers aren't as numerous as you think. I'm surprised nobody has caught on to which battleship Valiant is.
Well the griffins screwed that up. I wonder how the ponies will react when they find out that the humans have a big honking warship and fighters?
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One aircraft carrier is a lot when compared to the rest of the world you can also just convert ships into CVs, on the matter of the BB the only thing you mentioned on it was it's 15 inch guns and it's name, are you referencing the HMS Valiant? It's the only thing I can think of. On the matter of the lone BB, I think it would be better as a Montana Class instead of the Iowa Class, its a tad bit more modern.
Also, what continent are the ponies on?
7061604 Shit, made a quick edit. I meant to put Vanguard, not Valiant. Both are real battleships, but I meant to put the Vanguard, the last British Battleship. I chose the Iowa because it's a real battleship that was actually completed. I also put the Yamato Battleships and will put the (No I ain't telling you guys which ones yet) Battleships because they're real. It's a big world my friend, one aircraft carrier is not enough to carry out multiple missions in multiple places simultaneously. Yes, ponies are in a different continent.
7061620
Converting ships into carriers is very much possible and can be done to almost any ship, hell the US converted a paddle steamer into a carrier.
But I'm just going to assume that they haven't had any major naval war that would call for major air support.
What content are the ponies on? NA? SA? Africa? Some custom thing?
7061674 No, it's totally different from ours, different geography. I wish I can draw the map, but I'm fucking horrible at drawing. My best drawings are copying a Picasso and a Kandinsky (and an attempt to draw a cartoon Dick Cheney), but to create a totally different map? Yeah, gonna take me a very long time to do.
... I'm not a reviewer.
I like this story even though there's hundreds other like this of poorer quality but think with regular updates and a little longer chapters that should make this story stand out a little.
Now to address some problems. I see you like to put links and pictures to help better us picture the battleships and aircrafts but maybe it be best if you described 'em a little more instead of putting pictures(not links, I'm fine with those)
As I said I'm not reviewer(is that even the right word?) And this only my opinion on how to better your story, plus I respect anyone who can even write a story(since I can't even right a story since 3% autism starts kicking in along with their buddies Little Effort and Perfectionist)
7062229 I'm still learning. Describing things is currently my biggest problem when it comes to my stories, but I'm doing my best to try to input them. I actually planned for this chapter and the next chapter to be one chapter, but I would never get it done if I did.
Well, the coming report from those pegasi should be interesting.
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...Hey its my opinion and as I said, I have respect for anyone who write 'cause I can write if my life depended it.
A way that makes describing easier is just saying outloud what it looks like or look up the story Bad Mondays by The Handyman
No worries
this is really confusing
7064328 Things will be revealed as the story progresses.
i know, just want to read the next chapter, but you better have some missiles in this, not just big cannon
7064407 I know, they're modernized. Just like the Iowa in real life.
7065012 i think your miss a class of fighter the ''nuclear submarine''
and for Yamato class was largest of all battleship with 18 inch gun
the Iowa only had 16 inch
7061604 The Montana-class battleships of the United States Navy were planned as successors to the Iowa class, being slower but larger, better armored, and having superior firepower. Five were approved for construction during World War II, but changes in wartime building priorities resulted in their cancellation in favor of the Essex-class aircraft carriers and Iowa class before any Montana-class keels were laid. With beams of 121 feet, they would have been the first U.S. battleships as originally designed to be too wide to transit the 110-foot-wide locks of the Panama Canal.
Intended armament would have been 12 16-inch (406 mm) Mark 7 guns in four triple turrets, up from the Iowas' three triple 16s. With an increased anti-aircraft capability and thicker armor belt, the Montana class would have been the largest, best-protected, and most heavily armed U.S. battleships ever, the only class to come close to rivaling the Empire of Japan's immense Yamato-class battleships.
Consequently, the US Navy chose to cancel the Montana class in favor of more urgently needed aircraft carriers, amphibious and anti-submarine vessels
7066485 Oh, nuclear subs are there, they just haven't played their part yet. I never did say the Yamato and the Iowa are the only classes of battleships.
7066511 will the only will know only don't count German battleship Bismarck.
and here cool battleship file.navyfield.com/navyfield/forum/201302/27/mwqq4hag.jpg
7066527 And I thought the Germans were crazy. Did you mean don't add the Bismarck or am I reading that wrong?
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I know it was cancelled, I recommended he should use it because I can only see BBs being good for shore bombardment if they have such advanced aircraft carriers
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they were crazy but they were smart. i just say the Bismarck was naza idol ship.
i just hate naza but had good tech in they days.
i study ww2 all my life. and war. if one thing i know is war!
7066575 I know, just didn't think the Japanese were ambitious enough to design something like that.
7066774 wrong
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Design_A-150_battleship
they ever had rocket planes
Yamato
but German was close to war if was give more time on first jet.
Alternate History
7066897 Heh, now I know. I think I've been reading about Germany during WW2 too much.
7066922 it part of my job i make a live this way.
7066925 Well you're certainly doing a good job doing it. Ohkas actually would've been a huge threat if the US chose to invade Japan instead of dropping the Atom Bombs. I focused more on the Japanese warships, particularly the Yamato-Class. The first Battleship I fell in love with....followed by the Nagato-Class, Bismarck-Class, Iowa-Class, and Vanguard-Class.
7066949 i love the Yamato-Class but A-150_battleship would been super Yamato-Class with 20 inch main gun.
7066997 The pic made it look like a combination of the Yamato, Nagato, and Vanguard. Ship looks fucking beautiful, but now I'm debating if I should put it in the story. Either the ship was just completed, under construction, still planned, or a cancelled project.
7067051 go head this alternate universe isn't?
7068166 eeyup
Well this is an awesome story very military witch is cool . What I love about the military is the weapons and how they work
7079838 There will be a lot more shown, to the point you will have a massive orgasm if you're very into military vehicles and weapons.
7079878 OH YEAH
OK... I don't know if I miss this detail or not but is this an anthro equestria right? Or just normal ponies? By anthro I mean they still have wings and horns and not just muzzles and furs or tails.
Other than that, looking forward for more.
7062908 Indeed
7084323 Yes, they are anthro
7084498 oh... OK that cleared up my confusion TY
Seems like your making them lose and starting with those two pegasai getting away.
YAAA-MAAAAAA-TOOOOO~ Is gonna blow your ass up.
7084498
do you mean black?
By the title I’m gonna guess that everything goes wrong
8603978
Humans are slaves. You expected different?
So wait the Griffons know about the human empire... hmmm, this explains why the Griffons want the slavery of humans abolished in Equestria, maybe they know the true terrifying capabilities humanity has
These guys don't feel very consistent in terms of military technology. I thought they'd be having British Comets or ME 262s that aren't shit at most
Okay I guess they have cars
This is why modern tactics and weapons are better.