On the other side of the ocean, lies a long forgotten land. Quietly, they watched the other lands, biding their time. When the time is right, they will reveal themselves. On one hand is an olive branch. On the other, is a sword.
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CONTAINMENT BREACH!!
This is really good hope to see more
I may be missing parts of it but it feels that the human groups in this story are very disjointed. I am keeping track of several different factions and keeping them straight is not getting any easier. It feels like you are trying to set up a human civil war but with so many groups of humans it makes keeping track of who is allied with who and what each groups goals are hard. Otherwise this was an interesting chapter.
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I haven't even introduced any Insurrectionist groups yet. At this point, all Human groups introduced thus far are aligned with the Empire. Only Deputy Director Beria and General Russell are shown to have rebellious intent towards the Empire.
Looking forward to the most likely a disturbing shit storm in the Research facility.
It may not seem like it yet, but there are obvious signs that the human empire is falling apart at the seems. Plus really, jigsaw? That’s just messed up. And you just seem to glorify everything that the humans do, but that’s just my opinion. The humans are obviously messing with ancient forces that they shouldn’t, playing god (which always goes bad), and many people work themselves to the bone, and only get threats in return, while the emperor gets to relax (like that’s fare) and complains about freedom. If I had the wolfenstein army, I would nuke both sides back to the Stone Age, so there would be no winners or losers. But hey that’s MY opinion, now I just have to wait for somebody to try and talk down about MY opinion.
Plus, those coaches may not get fired, cause most places don’t want to lose an intire staff of coaches. That would make other would be coaches think that they go through coaches like shoes, and make them want to avoid that place like a plague.
You just proved my point. I was waiting for someone to say that it is flawed. So thanks, asshole.
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Didn't realize anybody thought either governments were perfect
The level of corruption is amazing. I’m actually surprised that they hadn’t split apart, or a huge civil war started.
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Didn't even showcase everything yet and you've already made conclusions.
Please, don't act as if governments today aren't corrupted.
It’s my choice. So I don’t give a crap what you say. You want to sink? Then don’t drag me with you.
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If you're gonna act like an asshole, then at least admit you're an asshole. I couldn't give a shit about your bad review, I've always expected them. However, if you're an asshole then that's when I have a problem with it.
Me acting like a asshole? Then I’m an asshole, but it takes one to know. Like your the one To talk.
If you have a problem with it, deal with it. That’s just part of life
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Look buddy, Hurikaner88 came to point out flaws in your argument then you proceeded to call him an asshole. He did not whatsoever insult you but you came in like OJ shoved his dick up your ass while R. Kelly pissed on your lemonade.
I know assholes are part of life, I've dealt with many. However, we're all trying to be civilized here and you came in like Chris Brown wanting to beat Rihanna.
Try to refrain from insulting others and stop acting like a prick.
My life, my rules. Civilized? On this website, there’s no civilized. I could do this all day. You know the way to end it? Don’t reply to this one. Then we could all go back to being ‘civilized’.
And you know why I can do this all day? Because it entertains me. I kept it going, because it’ Keeping me entertained.
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So being an asshole keeps you entertained. You must have such a sad life.
"Don't reply"
Buddy you've been commenting on my fic and all you've done is being an asshole. People in this fic do act civilized. You don't see everyone insulting each other everywhere in this site. If that was the case, Knighty and the others would've banned so many people. If you want to leave a comment about my fic, it should be constructive criticisms so I can make it better, but so far, you've done none of that.
Oh and congrats on the fic you've adopted, even though one "chapter" was just a statement that you've adopted this fic (In which the title literally says "This announcement will be removed soon" despite being published on October 21st) and the only chapter you've actually written didn't surpass 1,000 words. The previous author in one chapter wrote more than you did combined.
Follow Ulthor's advise and get an editor.
Sad life? I just found out my most favorite teacher just died today. And no, I will not get an editor. I don’t give a crap what people think. And a sad life!? I will let you in on a secret that I told nobody, not even my parents. I hate myself. I despise everything about me. I don’t see self worth in whatever I do. Think to myself, why not end it? But I lack the fucking motivation to do it. So continue with the hate, I need it, I deserve it.
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Boo fucking hoo
When my Art History Teacher died from brain cancer I didn't go out and act like an asshole.
When my grandfather died from bone cancer, I didn't go out to act like an asshole.
When I saw my friends get deployed, I didn't go out to act like an asshole.
When the rest of my family targeted my parents, my sister, and I because my parents were the only ones who graduated from college and made it out okay, I didn't go out and act like an asshole.
When my dad was missing for a large portion of my life because of work, I didn't go out and act like an asshole.
When my parents began fighting each other, my sister fighting with the both of them wanting to leave me and my parents behind, and putting me in the middle of every fight, I didn't go out and act like an asshole.
You have no excuse to be an asshole to everyone. What you need, is to see a therapist, someone to talk to. Try your school councilor, whoever you feel comfortable with. Let it all out. I did so with my councilor and cried once or twice in front of her. Told my adopted grandparents the same thing. No shame on that. Bottling up emotions will only harm you.
Like I said, talk to someone, your parents, your friends, teachers, councilors, relatives, anybody you're comfortable with who can give advice.
I can tell you right now, I would've committed suicide long ago if I didn't make a promise to my adopted grandparents. They convinced me no matter how much I fail, how much I disappoint my parents, keep your head up high and keep going. Don't fall into their expectations and create your own path. They aren't you.
Talk to someone face to face, not some random guy on the internet. It helps, trust me. I've been there.
Well boo hoo to you too bastard.
At least I don’t give long pointless rants about every single little detail that a single commenter makes, talk down to, in some shape or form. Don’t even give me a response, we’re done.
Your story ain’t even that bad, it seems ( at least from my view point) very one sided from the human perspective
Then again, they are more technologically advanced than them, so I can see that more easily.
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I'm just telling you man, go talk to someone and let out your feelings. It'll help you.
Nice picture though
Scp! Just great
Wtf in the comments section
Ok that is DEFINITELY from gravity falls
And what we have here is am ISIS sympathizing and satan worshiping piece of garbage. Noted. Crap story and an author who deserves to burn in Hell.
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excuse me. I worship the all powerful Lord Shaggy
SCPS YEEEESSSSS
WARNING, NEOMORPH DETECTED
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Yes it is
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All hail our one true lord ultra instinct Shaggy
Damn, the fact they have SCP and what appears to be the creatures from the COD Zombies universe make me wonder what other horrors have humanity created?
This is a reference to that crazy old woman from Wolfenstein New Order... Damn my dude... Epic tho xD
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Well actually it’s a reference to Professor Harold MacDougal from Red Dead Redemption.
You thought you were slick with that Mulan reference
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Well I mean you’re the only one to ever point that out so...
BASED BERNIE BASED EMPEROR POG
that dude was sad as a sack of shit and u rubbed salt to his wounds
good cod reference
This isn't shades of gray, this is a Fascist European Union vs a Pony Confederate States. If any communist groups show up they'll probably be akin to Eurasia and don't even pretend to be nice
Which we've barely seen btw
Two questions. Why are we expected to see these people as the good guys? And why is our first named Afrikaan character (to be honest I wasn't really following the characters) a stereotypical African American? If he's Afro Britanican that's fine but people in Africa generally don't act like that, Africans and African Americans are entirely different groups of people
Wait you mentioned SCP containment breach exists in this universe, how do they have these things? Did the UTE find these things and let people write make games about it it? If so why
Also I get the sense that this next chapter or so is going to be a distraction
Do I hear someone building a wall
On ground level, Vigilant saw another Human, an officer most likely, walking towards them.
That image is not gonna look good at the pearly gates