On the other side of the ocean, lies a long forgotten land. Quietly, they watched the other lands, biding their time. When the time is right, they will reveal themselves. On one hand is an olive branch. On the other, is a sword.
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This is an interesting story when it stays. In. the. present. as in the main plot. The last I dont know how many chapters have just been memories and stuff that's happened in the past and quite frankly are irrelevant to the story as a whole, are they interesting sure to some I bet but i dont remember the last time something actually happened in the main plot and its becoming really frustrating.
That's must've been the greatest day ever, but something's going to happen.
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The chapter before that is literally in the main plot
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yes I understand that, a month ago there was a chapter about a lost ship and what happened with it, but like I said, nothing happened it was all "side Story". I'm not trying to rile you up I just want to know what's going on. It feels like there's multiple points of view in the story and none of the points of view are ever concrete enough, it just skips around so much where this story becomes incoherent.
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Present day events are all part of the main plot
Everything else is sub plot
The sub plot I wrote not only because they contain events leading to the main plot, but I can create backgrounds for many of the characters and show their past. Of course, the entire sub plot can be a fic of itself, but the mods here will probably deem it not having enough MLP content so I wouldn’t be able to post it here where it’s easier to get feedback.
“So add MLP content” That won’t make any sense for what I envisioned for the characters and it won’t make sense to throw ponies into one of the character’s backgrounds.
Rest assured though, there is an entire episode involving Equestria prior to the main events.
Thank you for the feedback. There were sub plot ideas I was thinking of putting in there but I think I know how I can shorten them by cutting the ideas that aren’t necessary.
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At the end of the day write what you want, you do you my dude... but all this backstory to a lot of your side characters.......... none of your side characters are rememberable, maybe it's just me or maybe I'm talking for other people but the only person we care about or want to interact with the story is the emperor.
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I haven’t gotten more into depth for the characters either I agree.
Would I have made a fic or a book based from the concept of the sub plots? Absolutely, but I also can’t at this time which frustrates me so I write them here but with changes so Fimfiction would accept it.
Also, yes I was cranky before but that’s only because I just woke up.
The Emperor isn’t suppose to be the only main character and honestly, I’ve done a poor job developing the others who aren’t suppose to be side characters i.e. Wizard, Azarov, Lyra, etc.
Eh
Awesome work, keep it up!
When are we gonna get to the actual invasion of Equestria?! I’m dying from anticipation over here!
50% of taco bell?! Sign me up!
So when do you think we can expect a new chapter? Because the anticipation alone is enough to make someone reach half there body through the screen, grab you by the shoulders, then start shaking you and screaming "WHEN IS IT!?!?"
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Don't forget the meeting with all world leaders, let's hope Celestia doesn't try to behead our emperor
MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!!!!!!!!!! Also i like it (if you get the reference then kudos to you comrade!)
When new chap?
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After the next chapter of my other story
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Witch one is that?
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Soldier of Three Armies
“Men are basically smart or dumb and lazy or ambitious. The dumb and ambitious ones are dangerous and I get rid of them. The dumb and lazy ones I give mundane duties. The smart and ambitious ones I put on my staff. The smart and lazy ones I make my commanders.” From Erwin Rommel right?
New chapter yet?
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Working on it
Didn't know Max was in a cult, damn.
So who were the four others who were executed along side McEvoy?
I wasn't sure until now but they are anthro, this sene would be Hella awkward if she had turned around and thrown her ass on him. This makes way more sense.