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Pondering on how he behaved at the Sisterhooves Social, somepony is quite competitive and wants to challenge him with a deal that could help him with the upcoming Cider Season. But if he loses, well its going to be quite a earful from his Sister.

For KarmaDash Prompt 2 contest

Kinda hope they do a General Catagory Tag soon

*edit* fixed most typos *edit*

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Comments ( 6 )

This is fun story and I like it! I also like the Mac X Dash ship too! :pinkiehappy:

Aw man! I was gonna do something like this!

Ah well, you did great job! Faved! :pinkiehappy:

(Ah, yes! Very good story! Many cheers!)

Well if there was ever a good reason to be in 2nd the whole way during a race, Mac had a good one.

And yes, he will hear about it again. Applejack's "brother" sense and "best friend" sense went off at the same time.

6884800 Let's just hope that Applejack will Allow Big Mac and Rainbow Dash to date each other.

I would say this was a pretty nice story even though I probably had to treat this as an alternate universe but I still think that's a pretty cute shipping story seeing how Big Macintosh and Rainbow Dash competing with each other after that incident from the sister social hooves but Rainbow Dash really respected him so much and even kind of likes him a lot after that little race they tied but he still kept his promise to give her the cider but she also wants to help out too as well since both of them lost but he insisted instead I would say that's pretty nice of him to do that well I would say this was a nice one keep up the good work

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