No words of mine can express how amazing this story was.

I loved this story a lot. And it was a treat to read. I know I would appreciate a sequel, but maybe that's just me and this isn't in need of one.

But a sequel to this would be awesome.

7284093 I think I can try....

This story was a truly epic read! Instant like and fave for you, fellow writer! Oh! And a six pack of beer for you, too! Thank you, Spirit Of Fantasy!

7284235 thanks but i don't drink. appreciate the offer though

A-fucking-mazing

7284241 a great ending to a great story loved it i hope you can create another story that is just as great if not better than this one

7284241 I love it please make a sequel

A Happy Ending

LOVE IT!

I love it a vary no a exultant story and it is portrayed super good.

As to a sequel, yes there is lost of possible ways it code go but at the same time I just don't feel one is needed here.

I love it!????

Couldn't of had a better ending.????

7284241

Good work, and don't forget what I said to you earlier.

7304956 maybe they don't care think of the story not the quality of writing

good job it's a good story but a little bit to much sex tone it down to every other chapter and you'll be fine

I loved this story from the time i started reading all the way to now and now i want to see more good job Spirit you did a excellent job on this fanfiction, so thank you
-Erebus

7304972 Can you PLEASE make a sequel?!

This is one of the very few stories that has been able to make me cry like a little bitch. The emotion never leaves throughout the whole story. A very nice treat to read indeed. I tip my hat to you, my good sir.

This is the only story that has managed to get me to cry in at least 8 years. Good job, I hope you enjoyed writing this story, as I enjoyed reading it.

7392471 Only story that made me cry was MLD towards the end when Dashie and Ryan or Brian are having their moment. Also the the comic "Sorry I couldn't be there for you", that left me with a big piece of depression and sadness in my gut for 3 days. It was so sad....

7451229 the feels will open our hearts to people every where that suffer from similar miseries and hope to make them better

7451328 their magic isn't strong enough. Only discords magic was strong enough to travel through dimensions and other worlds

10/10 IGN fucking beautiful also jack needs to rock up in a mini sequel where he is on his death bed and Dylan says his goodbyes to him

7468304 very kind of you to express at your best friend

7472580 I was very young when I first wrote this on fan fiction. I wasn't smart at all, so I'm sorry if I wasn't smart enough to know those detail, I must be SUCH an idiot and waste of space to you!

I already had told people no criticism

7476480 For you to comment without malice shows you have heart my friend.

7491698
this story is worthy of a sequel and we can only hope it happens.

7495382 I can't stress this enough. NO criticism!

I fucking knew there was gonna be a Fluffy Jr!

Anyways, this story gave me so much feels, but only to the point to have a lump in my throat, rare tears would show. I hope their's a sequal that maybe shows how Dylan adjust to Equestria and maybe goes through the ponies who weren't too keen for an alien to get both the princesses hearts(most likely Blueblood is one of them).

7500015 check me out at fan fiction and you'll find a sequel

7500067
Since there's a sequal in that site, will you move it to this one as well?

7500278 no. Me and fim fic have a falling out thanks to some certain ignorant people and the no justice system in this site

7500298
Well, if it's not about his first few days in Equestria, then maybe you can make a story around that instead.

7500620 story making isn't the same as it was when I was young

7500625
Aww, that stinks.

7501076 sorry

7501079
It's okay ^^

7501196 k

7501883 people don't normally think of those little things when choosing to leave their entire world behind.

7502736 I say this is an AMAZING story! All though there were its errors it was still enjoyable! With this I think you should make a sequel about Dylan's life in equestria and maybe JUST maybe him and the princesses start a family. Anywho really enjoyed this and hope to see more like it from you!

7504174 the sequel is at fan fic under my same name

7504186 Sweet! What is the name?

7505102 human and the princesses

7505427 LOL well that is kinda the same. Oh well.

7505427 well I looked and all I see is 3 stories non by the name you gave me.

7506306 fan fiction. Other site, not fim fic

7506373 Ahhhh mind giving me a link to it?

7506865 https://www.fanfiction.net/~spiritoffantasy

7506898 It says it's not a page.

7507108 try this one

https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5486038/Spirit-Of-Fantasy

7507126 EEYUP! Thanks

7507146 no prob, im more active in fan fic too