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Spirit Of Fantasy


Hi, what's up guys. This is Spirit of fantasy. I'm here to write and give a good story to all my followers out there. Please show the Spirit some love and he will give love back

Comments ( 328 )

Good hook, though you do have a few missing words and a few other minor issues, but a good start nevertheless.

isn't dylan stone the antagonist for black ops 3 lol

decent movement of the plot, though it could do with some cleaning up

Even within the brony community there are jerks just ignore them I say it's a good story

Yes stay hidden from the rest of the population princesses...
We wouldn't want another Roswell incident

I like this. Cant wait for the next chapter :D:yay:

A sad human with first world problems falls in love with the Princesses. Oh and can't forget that sex tag either.

Nice Chapter Keep it up :twilightsmile:

I think this story is very nice and I do hope you ignore hateful opinions and continue on these stories :pinkiesmile:

6846864 Don't you hate it when your comments don't get a response?

6875197 Tell me about it. But what made you decide to make that comment here? There's only one negative comment. ...I think.

Love the story. Waiting for the next chapter :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by chaoticevl deleted Mar 1st, 2016

Hey if you are going to put more sad music titles in the story i recommend ashes of eden by breaking benjamins, if you need more music titles ask me i might able to help:twilightsmile:. Also like the story so far

I don't mind the wait. It's a good story and a good chapter. A little violent, but nothing too horrible.

Here's looking forward to the next chapter!

I love you man...like so much thank you for the new chapter :yay:

Comment posted by RegalCrescent45 deleted Apr 14th, 2016

The Shipping Ship Has Just Shipped Off~:rainbowkiss:

: You have our full support and motivation for this story man

7147419 oh crap I know this is going to be bad

Um ... Use a spell to hide appearance ...?
Oooh .white and black Great Dane dogs
somebody make this art now
Tia and LuLu fighting over squeeky toy
Cuteness overload
Or is their combined magic still zapped ....

ok well first I have to say I am new to this story. (I know caption obvious first chapter and all)
but as of right now this story has my full attention it is starting strong and has a good story line as of now.

I will be holding off on voting till I see how this all plays out in the following chapters.

this story is looking good a little rough in places but over all a good story.

Author's Note:
sorry for the wait. here's the new chapter. please enjoy, and please no more hate:ajbemused:
as to having haters you are a author and haters will be haters if they keep at it this site has a really cool thing simply block them.
but remember even if they are hating read between the lines look at way they are and see if it code be put on paper differently.
even haters can give a insight to things if you look at it in the right light.

question is there a reason for setting your story in Pennsylvania??

a vary good story that has earned a up vote from me.
I will be watching for more up dates.

Please dont tell me your letting the cat get killed and he goes on a murderous rampage.

a good chapter.
and now one more person knows. there is getting to be to may that know something is going to happen.

If old man Jack gets the chance to accompany Dylan to Equestria
I'd ship him with Granny Smith
Lol

Oh shit. Hes goin home to the house that was probably wrecked because he forgot to lock it:raritydespair:

Yeah, I can't see this being kept a 'secret' much longer. Doesn't anyone remember the old saying 'Two can keep a secret only if one is dead.'? And will someone please beat the ass of that entire Benson family?

Comment posted by Comnislasher deleted Apr 23rd, 2016

Disclaimer, the movie doesn't belong to me. so there's that. And you're wondering, where is discord at? When does, he come in? In the next few chapters, that is all.

Shit man. This is getting exciting. Please keep it up.

some how I am getting a feeling that something is up with Fluffy.

Pretty sure one of the teens went into the house and took the cat. Knowing them probably killed it

Oooh if those kids messed with fluffy, there will be hell to pay

Damn... got meh all hot n bothered thinking we finally get some Snu Snu action ...only for the chapter to abruptly end ...

God i had 2 suffer yet another fucking cliffhanger GOD can u authors stop tormenting with them!?!?!?!?!?










By the way nice chapter but if the accidentaly shot luna i will hate you forever

It's easy to forget how cruel kids can be. The fuck is wrong with someone that they would gut at cat like that and then tried to kill two beings with sentience.

now this is how to do a cliffhanger.:pinkiegasp:

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