• Published 8th Jun 2012
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Harmony's End - JawJoe



Equestria is in chaos as Twilight Sparkle sets out on a grim quest to restore harmony.

Comments ( 32 )

So it ends.

This isn't an ending, it's just building up for one... well, two perhaps. Are you seriously gonna quit here?

Until you truly end it I shall withhold the mustaches. Even if you deserve all twelve of them.:pinkiecrazy:

Just what is going on in that little head of yours? Still this was a nice little surprise to get when I logged on.

THERES NO CLOSURE...THIS IS LIKE THE HALO 2 ending...:twilightangry2:

Somehow, I expected this.:trixieshiftright:

Either way, great story.:trollestia:

O_o so you're ending it just like BO1 did? Harsh man, really. I'd love to see how you could continue this maybe adapting soulreaver or blood omen 2. Scoots as Raziel would probably work.

So a abrupt ending then? I do admit that they aren't my favorites ,since I have an extreme difficult time to set my ending in there if I don't see it on black and white first!

Can we hope for a sequel, perhaps?

1387212 Twilight's choice is practically spelled out for you. You just have to look at it from outside the box.

As for a sequel, I'm not planning on doing one right now. Sorry!

1390256. Oh that it just cruel. I figured it out, but only because I read this hint. Also not a fan of ending at this spot; I'd prefer it if you had done an epilogue, but that's just a personal preference. Definitely great for a first fic, and I'm looking forward to more of Night Shift.

That was interesting. Though familiarity with the plot of Blood Omen resulted in guessing what's going to happen next. Oh, and I kept expecting appearance of the equivalent of Soul Reaver. But I don't know what it purpose could it served in this tale.
Thank you for the story.

1620814 I tried my best to do the game justice. If you liked it, then I probably didn't fail horribly. Thank you, sir.

okay, big fan of this story. i try to read it at least ever other year. the ending was nice and open, ready for any interpratation by anyone really. and it gave the game justice. honestly. the legacy of kain games are a childhood fav. of mine, and i can't find any good storys that do them justice. but when i fond this story, i was hooked. you got the diologe almost as shakespearn as the games did, and i think this is one of my favorite storys on this site. i really wish you would do soul reaver or blood omen 2 would suvice, but this i will handle. keep doing what you do, jawjoe.

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Interesting that you like it so much. Looking back, as the author, I find this story horrible. If I were to write it today, I'd do a lot of things very, very differently.

But yeah, I tried to do the games justice. If fans of the game like this story, I take it I succeeded. :twilightsmile:

Holy shit that ending. This story has been one wild ride, that's for sure.

it is a shame that the timeline is messed up this way for what seems to be for good. And wow, the death of magic, of two races (alicorn and unicorn).

this story leaves a lot to contemplate.

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It is indeed.

Well this was good.
Cant quite figure out Twilight's choice there at the end.
If memory serves then I have played at least the soul reaver game from that series.
Looking forward to reading more of your stuff.

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I'm honestly always kind of surprised when someone says they liked Harmony's End. I consider it my weakest work by far.

As for Twilight's choice... take a look at the chapter titles again.

5777150 While the difference between this and Night Shift (which is awesome) is telling. This is still very good. The story idea is very compelling and while you might consider it weak it flows rather well. Its easy to get sucked in. I dont know, it read like Twilight was telling me a story, it's not something you run across all that often. I have read worse believe me, this I could not easily walk away from, it was just to good.

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Well, I'm glad you liked it. :twilightsmile:

This looks... familiar

Hey, didn't I review this at one point? :rainbowhuh:

BleedingRaindrops

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Now that's a name I haven't heard in a long, long time...

Yes, you did, when it only had a few chapters. This was my first fic. It's quite terrible. But it set me on this path of pony writing, and for that it'll always be special to me.

Holy shit, this is a really well-written and intense story! You've earned yourself a like, favorite, and the #2 spot on my most favorite MLP fanfictions of all time.

Oh, and what's Twilight's choice? I know you said to look at the titles for clues, but I'm still a little confused.

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Really? I thought this is easily my worst fic. It was my first, you know. If you liked this one, you'll probably love my other things; they're much better written.

As for Twilight's choice: look at the chapter titles.

This is by far the best written fanfic I have read so far

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Also will there ever be a follow up to this story? I would love to see another mlp adaptation of the Legacy Of Kain series.

Those who have played Blood omen will know what decision I take Twilight at the end

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So she chose the bad decision?

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