980800 I'm puzzled too. The few comments on here are all positive and the reviewers I've sent this to all had good things to say about it. Hey, if you want to help me, spread the word! Talk about it! Link it everywhere you know! Advertise shamelessly! Hmm. I should probably try to get this onto Equestria Daily.. although I don't think it could make the cut. Should I try?
Either way, newest chapter is up. Go read it y'all.
All I have to say is dang, Twilight. Consider the consequences of who you killed on the spot! Had she not been so quick to kill Candace, Shining Armor could have held the shield better than Loon Moon. Had she not been so quick to kill Fluttershy and finished the negotiations with the dragons, stronger aerial support. The same thing with Rarity, she could have used the diamond dogs and maybe get Spike on her s.
980800 I'm puzzled too. The few comments on here are all positive and the reviewers I've sent this to all had good things to say about it. Hey, if you want to help me, spread the word! Talk about it! Link it everywhere you know! Advertise shamelessly! Hmm. I should probably try to get this onto Equestria Daily.. although I don't think it could make the cut. Should I try?
Either way, newest chapter is up. Go read it y'all.
All I have to say is dang, Twilight. Consider the consequences of who you killed on the spot! Had she not been so quick to kill Candace, Shining Armor could have held the shield better than Loon Moon. Had she not been so quick to kill Fluttershy and finished the negotiations with the dragons, stronger aerial support. The same thing with Rarity, she could have used the diamond dogs and maybe get Spike on her s.
I hope Twilight never rules a country.
988015 If you think things have been going downhill until now, you really gotta brace yourself for what is to come...