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The Abyss


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Waking up with Twilight snuggled up against her on the morning of Hearts and Hooves Day, Rainbow Dash is curious as to what she has planned for them. As Twilight wakes up, Rainbow is shocked to find that her marefriend has a full day of studying planned, so she takes it upon herself to plan the best Hearts and Hooves Day that Twilight has ever had.

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Comments ( 27 )

New Abyss story is best story

what could there be better to start a weekened than a new story of my favourite author :pinkiehappy:

I feel really sorry for dashi, I hope she can find a way to get a nice Hearts and Hooves Day

Another amazing story from an amazing writer.

The long description has a few repetitive word choices, in both "waking" and "planned".

*hands cadence cupids uzi* your gonna need this.

Wow you have been productive recently. Another story of yours added to my tracking folder.

Oh my. Um... Sorry RD, you'll just have to find another way to get her attention...well, attention in a good way.

Nice start abyss , love that dashie is the big spoon in this one (unlike your scoots story) buut was the slap really necessary?
Anyways i'm looking forward to moar

I can't read this. The premise is good, but the slap and just how awful and out of character Twilight is ruins it for me.

i like it. i have hints of Twi Dash in a few of my stories. Their so perfect together dont you think?

Cute, rainbow should get a job at McDonald's

Needs more snuggles. :rainbowwild:

And a more relaxed Twilight. :facehoof:
The intention of making breakfast is already something, isn't it?

This is sooooo adorable! The fluff is real...:heart:

Warm and fuzzies for every pony! I love it! :heart:

Aaaargh too cute !!!! x_x

The RD picture at the end. So... romantic? Never thought I'd sat that about RD. :twilightsmile:

I go offline for a couple of days to job hunt and a new Abyss story pops up without a notification?!?!

Gonna read now...

6979549 yeah that's jarring for me too

OMG You write like a god!

Ah. The troubles that occur daily with couples. Glad I read this.

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